Young Writers Society

Very good ^-^. I think a lot of us feel similarly about YWS (or have once before). I just have one complaint: too much description. It's like cutting a twig with a chainsaw when you could have just done it yourself. Like being forced to eat the whole Thanksgiving Turkey. Like putting 16 gigs of RAM in a computer. Like buying a 500 gig mp3 player and only listening to music on it. Like putting so many frozen dinners in your refrigerator that you can't shut the door. Like drinking a milkshake too fast and getting a brainfreeze.

Or, just like the paragraph above -_^. Haha, good job, and keep writing!

I absolutely loved this! It was very real and it was cute and amusing.
Good job! I really like your writing style too :]

I love the "blueberry chat room" line!

Hi sillyducky! I'm SporkPunk, and I'll be reviewing this!

I know I'm really late on this, but I kept forgetting to review it after I saw it. It's awesome, brilliant, wonderful, phantasmagorical. I think you captured exactly how everyone feels about YWS, and the imagery is brilliant, especially blueberry chat room. I loved that. I can bring myself to tear this apart. I'm going to go all pseudo-philosophical and say that the imperfections, combined with the brilliance represent what YWS is all about. Improving our writing, and becoming all the better for it.

This was great.

Sporks

Hahaha... YWS is cheating on you with me. Just so you know!

My main critique would be that you mentioned this in the beginning:

"Your involvement in my life is significantly affecting my sleep, social life, and even my grades."

I have to wonder with this exactly how it is affecting you! So, a couple of anecdotes would be wonderful here.

But, truly, this is a magnificent love letter!

That's so nunu-pie! But warning. look at everyone! I smell a playa! YWS IS A PLAYA!

I loved it!!! It's like a disease it follows you everywhere. I go to sleep thinking about what I want to read next or review next. This is soo true. I loved it so much!
Wicked <3