I'm kind of scared to comment now.. That gave me the chills; every single sentence. I loved reading this, even if it was so dark. What a tragedy...I would love for you to make this into a full story or novel! I would totally read that...if my parents let me. O_o lol Anywho, this was great. It was awesome, and totally worth reading.I think you just took my innocence.
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