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Harry Potter and the Chamber of Secrets (Twitterized)



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Mon Aug 01, 2011 9:31 pm
Spyndlethread says...



OMG LOVE LOVE LOVE

Kay sorry. This made me laugh soooooo hard. There isn't really anything wrong with it, it is just plain hilarious! I really enjoyed it.
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Mon Aug 01, 2011 11:09 pm
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I loved it! The only problem was, that with twitter the posts come in as most recent, from last to first, instead of first to last. Now I know for reading purposes this is in the correct order but if you wanted to make the whole twitter thing more legit, that's how you would do it. Also, adding in the other characters with mentions and stuff would make it pretty cool too. (:
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Mon Aug 01, 2011 11:12 pm
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AHAHA!

Harry Potter just got more interesting to read. =D
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Tue Aug 02, 2011 8:13 am
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Haha! Soon all books will be twitterised :-P excellent Berlyn! If you do this while bored, I'm lookiong forward to seeing what you can come up with on a serious level...

Before you post it in twitter, maybe you want to check copyright issues? Other than that, I think everyone else has done the spelling correction, and all that nitty gritty stuff. Thumbs up from me!
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Fri Aug 05, 2011 4:19 pm
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This was so funny! I loved it! The only critique I have was that at point you spelt Hermione's name wrong. That's it, just a simple mistake....Please do the rest of the series! I would defininetley read them all. I loved it! I loved it! I loved it! Really nicley done!
  





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Fri Aug 05, 2011 7:51 pm
Mikko says...



These are really funny and I hope you 'twitterise' all the books!

@RonWeasley ready for the chamber tonight? ;)
Yep. It sounded VERY wrong LOL! Ewww I just imagined Harry saying it in a 'sexy' way and Ron feeling unconfortable. xD Like "First the giant spiders and now this!"

Great job and please please please keep twitterising the whole series! :)
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Sat Aug 06, 2011 10:17 pm
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You are seriously one of the most epic people on the face of the planet for thinking this up! I laughed my ass off from beginning to end (but especially at the end because that last tweet was hilarious!). All I can say is that I seriously love you! PLEAAASSSEE do one for all of the books, I would die humored! Amazing Job!!!
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Sun Aug 07, 2011 10:29 am
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This was recommended so I checked it out. I guess the main hole is that phones/internet don't work in Hogwarts though I understand its supposed to be comidic. While I found it fun and engaging for the first few updates after that it became a bit trite.

I'm sure you're on to a winner here and this would be a hit, particulary with those who don't read a lot or who are lazy.
  





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Sun Aug 07, 2011 10:36 am
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I love this! It's such a cool idea! I especially liked the tweet about the previous tweet sounding wrong :)
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Tue Aug 09, 2011 9:57 am
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Whenever there is this many posts on a work I feel it's kind of pointless to give feedback as everything has already been said, but I couldn't resist telling you that I found this really funny and enjoyable to read!
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Tue Aug 09, 2011 5:27 pm
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I loved this! :D Can you do one for Prisoner of Azkaban? :)

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Tue Aug 09, 2011 9:29 pm
Froggy4224 says...



This was hilarious make more plz. =)
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Tue Aug 09, 2011 10:48 pm
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Ahahahahahahahahahahahahaahahahahahahahahahahahaha. (That's all I have to say. :) Good job! It was hilarious. Made my day.)
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Wed Aug 10, 2011 12:28 pm
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Loved it!! Loved it loved it loved it loved it!!! So much!! Brilliant!! totally engrossing, enjoyable, lovable, fun, exiting, blah, blah..... for a potter fan like me!!!!! Awesome!!

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Thu Aug 11, 2011 6:10 am
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OH MY GOD THAT WAS AMAZING!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! YAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAYYYYYYYYYYYY!!!!!! :D :D :D :D :D :D
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