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Sun Dec 05, 2004 4:37 am
Gracey13 says...



She rushed
rushed
rushed
Couldn't get there fast enough
She must complete her task
I rushed
rushed
rushed
I can't get there fast enough
I can't complete my task
I need help
help
help
I must get Help
I must tell Help to run
I must tell Help to rush
I must tell Help to complete my task
Do my own duty
In Helps manner
Help rushed
Help is rushing
Help will rush
Help will complete my Task.
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But who is Help?
Who is the help.....
Where is the help.....
How do I locate Him?
Is help a Him?
Is help a her?
Is help a them?
Is it one?
Where is help?
Who is he?
Where is she?
Who is She?
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I must find Help.
Help must help.
Or will it be.....
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Tue Dec 14, 2004 1:41 am
Crysi says...



*nods* I think that flows a lot better. Although you could have just edited your old post :wink:
  








Perhaps when we find ourselves wanting everything, it is because we are dangerously close to wanting nothing.
— Sylvia Plath