Ugh... too much physics for me right now. Still, you can always insert graphics in this piece by going to http://imageshack.us , downloading the pictures to the server, and then posting them on YWS with the directions provided.
...also, if you really are serious about getting this published, then it might be good to take this off the site?
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I agree. If you are about to sell this, and try to get it published, it definitely would be a good idea to get it off this site. I liked the your approach, and it was very scientifically pleasing.
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