Hey! This was a really nice creative piece! When its fiction its enough that it is appealin.. It is not exactly important to make complete sense and i mean it in a positive light! You can be a fantastic humor writer! You should try gettin round that! You are creative of course! Your just a little too creative to be understood maybe.. But it would be wonderful read all that stuff you write! Cuz m pretty sure that it is just as crazily unique like this one!
Good job!
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