The Samaritan is burning.
I shield my eyes from the flames, stumbling around through the blazing hallways of the ship. I can barely breathe, the smoke seeping into my lungs like tar. Sweat pours down my face. Every inch of my body is in shock, and I can feel my heart pounding like thunderclap. How many more beats does it have left, I wonder, before it is snuffed out entirely?
The flames cloud my vision, and I run – half-blind – through the decaying vessel. I turn a corner at the med bay, the screams of the dying wounded penetrating the walls and chaos. No time to help the sick, no time for anything. I run, as fast as my feet will carry me, towards the escape pods.
I stop at the nearest pod. There are six seats, five passengers. I crawl into the pod, catching the nervous glances of those already fastened in. I sit down in the remaining seat, and the orifice closes. For a moment, all that exists is darkness, and the muffled bedlam erupting from the other side of the door. There is a creaking sound, and for a moment I wonder if the machine has malfunctioned. A knot has twisted in my stomach, and I am afraid.
Then, a hissing sound and a quick jolt shivers through the capsule as it is ejected from the flaming starship. The pod shakes as it descends. The fluorescents go on, and the shaken faces of the passengers around me snap into reality. I turn away, and look out the window at the crest the escape pod. Through its glass I see an auburn sphere suspended in space, dark blue veins covering its surface like cancer.
I close my eyes, and let darkness cloud my vision as we plummet into the planet's atmosphere. The vessel quivers as it descends. It might not hold together; you hear about it all the time, faulty pods shattering in mid-space and abandoning its passengers to the lifeless void.
I clutch my hands against my seat and the cold, uncaring metal doing nothing to chill my raging blood. There is heavy breathing, then crying, and finally a scream as the shell of the capsule begins to creak and rattle. The pod hisses the sound of engines as its landing mechanisms kicking in.
The pod begins to shake violently. We have collided into the planet, this I know, yet I dare not open my eyes. More screaming, as the ship shakes us up and down. I fear my neck might snap, that my hellish plunge will have been for nothing. I can feel myself fading away, can feel the oxygen leaving my system. I keep my eyes closed, refusing to look, refusing to accept and –
– everything goes black and for some time between a moment and an eternity, I am in darkness so I wonder is this Heaven or Hell, even as I am –
– yanked back into reality. My eyes snap open, and air floods into my lungs. My body aches, but I think that nothing is broken. The sky above me is dark, and filled with unblinking, emotionless stars. Screams and cries pour in as my hearing returns, and I struggle to my feet.
I am in a vast desert, its amber sands stretching on for miles in all directions. Across the panorama, I see blue, tube-like substances protruding out of the planet's skin. I wonder - briefly - if I am imagining this, but my attention is snapped to the bedlam all around me. The area around me is littered with the bodies of the dying and the dead. Escape pods are scattered all around, some of them intact and others burnt away or lost in the descent. Survivors scramble around, tending as best they can to the wounded. Panic fills the air, and the chaos numbs my mind.
I do my best to help, despite my pain, but there is nothing I can do to aid them. Our wounded are bleeding, screaming, dying all around, and God help me there's nothing I can do.
My head is pounding, harder and harder as the seconds go by. Physically, it started when I woke up, but I feel as if it has been with me for days. The drum-beat of ache resounding with rhythm and fervor. The pain is humbling, and I pray it will abate.
I try to distract myself from the agony. I stand over a man as another (a woman) attempts to stop his bleeding, using scraps of her own clothes as bandages. I try to help, but nothing can be done. The wound is too deep, the bleeding too profuse. I take my hand in his, and for the first time my eyes meet with the dying. As he looks at me, his blue eyes seem to fill with fear. He reaches out, as if to touch me, and his lips struggle to form words, but he never releases them. Eyes wide, his arm sinks the the ground, limp. I am still clutching his other hand in mine; I place it upon his chest.
I try to close his eyes, but they will not budge. The woman begins to cry, and there is little I can do to comfort her. I reach under the man's shirt and retrieve his dog tag. His name is ROBERT BROWN, I tell her. But it does not help her to know his name; in fact, all it does is make her weep all the more.
The carnage continues around me, and it doesn't seem to register. I look up into the sky, the moans of the marred echoing inside my throbbing head, and when I turn my head to the sky all I see in its dark expanse is the burning remnants of the Samaritan, torn asunder in the sunless sky. It is only a matter of time before the planet's gravity takes what remains of our vessel.
I help tend to the dying, doing the best I can to ease their pain. In the end, when the dead are pronounced and covered, there are seventeen of us remaining; twelve have perished in the descent. We bury the dead in the sand, using fragments from the escape pods to mark their locations. When the lost are buried and our labor finished, I sling the dog-tag of Robert Brown over his makeshift grave, and join the others.
Among the survivors, conversations slowly but surely begins to form. Where were you when the ship started to go down? Did you see my friend, my child, my lover? Are we the only survivors? Was the distress beacon launched?
Are they coming for us? If so, how long before they arrive? If not, how long can we survive?
I watch as the last remnants of the Samaritan descends down into the planet, a massive scatter of burning metal crashing down into the planet. It collides into the faraway desert with a powerless clap of thunder and madness. And when the last of the noise has died, everyone seems to stop and watch as the smoke begins to slink against the black, unflinching sky.
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