AN: So, I've wanted to write a science-fiction short story for a while. This is kind of dystopian, and it's the first part. captain.classy helped me with the idea for this! It's rough, and I'm sort of figuring things out as I go.
At four-thirty am, Michael crawls on his sister's bed, feeling the cold sting of the rusted metal frame brush past his legs. “Emily,” he says, tugging at the white cotton sleeve of her t-shirt. “It's time to get up. I don't want to miss breakfast again.” Even though it's always a cold, stale biscuit and cup of lukewarm orange juice, it's better than starving, which Michael and Emily have done two days in a row for sleeping in; Michael was hungry and determined not to make it the third. When Emily doesn't wake, he takes the thin, scratchy blanket covering her body and thrusts it to the side.
A few seconds later, he feels cool, soft arms wrap around his stomach and delicate, filed finger nails across his body. This sends him into a frenzy. “Stop! Stop!” he tries between breaths.
“Okay, stinker,” Emily says with a laugh as she sits up in her bed. “Get dressed and we'll go.”
Michael nods and walks across the room to his bed. It is identical to his sister's. Beside the bed, there is a metal dresser in which all of his personal belongings are kept. He finds his daily uniform; an ash gray shirt and denim pants, and begins to slip it on. Emily is sitting up in her bed, rubbing her eyes. Despite the five years that she's spent in the camp, she's never quite gotten used to the routine. Michael was only a few months old when they came, so he doesn't know any differently.
Michael is ready and Emily is just getting out of bed. He impatiently glances at the clock on the gray linoleum wall.
“We have to be there in ten minutes,” he says. “Please, Emily, I don't want to miss breakfast again...”
“We won't. I promise,” Emily says gently as she gets her own clothes, identical to Michael's except for the size, out of the dresser. As they exit, Michael looks at the door to their bathroom, and Emily glances at the clock. four-forty am. If they're not in the dining hall in five minutes, they'll miss breakfast again. “We'll have to brush hair and teeth and all of that when we get back. Come on.” She takes Michael's hand and leads him out of their compartment, into the dusty courtyard.
It is still dark, and will be for just under another hour. Despite this, it is already very hot and humid. It is desolate as they walk to the top of the hill, where the worn gray building that is the dining hall sits like a rock. Everyone else who is going to have breakfast today is already inside, sitting at the metal tables, waiting patiently for the clock to strike four forty-five.
“You know, Michael,” Emily tries, pushing a strand of her matted blond hair out of her eyes. “You know it's hot like this?”
“Well, they don't serve it here, but, well, in the outside world--”
“Outside world?”
“Well, you were just a baby, but we used to live where we had hot food,” Emily says, her mouth beginning to water at the memories. “For breakfast, we wouldn't just have biscuits, we would have things like scrambled eggs and sausage and pancakes with maple syrup and chocolate muffins....”
“What are you talking about?”
“Never mind,” Emily says with a sigh. Of course he doesn't know. In the camp, discussion of the outside world is forbidden. If you came to it an an age so young you couldn't remember, there is no way of knowing that it exists. Emily had been trying to hint this to Michael, maybe spark even the tiniest flash, but it was hopeless. He lived in a world where getting up at four thirty, where living in crowded, stuffed compartments and having negligible portions of food was normal. After two more years, they would be free. As the camp's purpose was to discipline children and prepare them to be obedient adults, it was a requirement for all camp members to leave upon turning eighteen. Michael could come with Emily because she would be his legal guardian. Only two more years.
They slipped in the doors of the dining hall at four forty-three and are met with tired glances.
“I'm starving, Emily,” he says upon taking seats at a two-person table near the windows. An alarm bell rings and a female voice is heard over the loudspeakers at each corner of the room. “It is now four forty-five. If you are not in the dining hall at this time, you may not have breakfast. Servers will be out momentarily with your portions. You are limited to your portion are your portion alone. There are serious consequences if you do not abide by this rule. After breakfast you will each report back to your compartments where your schedule for the day has been dropped off for you. You must abide by this schedule. If you are found to be missing from your appointed location there will be serious consequences. Thank you. Have a nice day.” It's a recorded voice. This plays every morning on the loudspeaker. After its conclusion, four men dressed in gray t-shirts and pants come into the dining hall, carrying tupperware filled with biscuits and cartons of orange juice. It is silent. As they wait for them to get to their table, Emily looks into her brother's eyes and can't help but notice how empty they seem, how fixated they are on the biscuits that are being passed around. The men arrive at their table and deposit two orange juice cartons and two biscuits. Michael takes his and is finished within a second. Emily is about to bite into her own when they hear a scream from the other end of the cafeteria. They whirl around and see three of the men who served their food trying to control a girl with long black hair, who looks to be about thirteen. The fourth is carrying a young boy who is either Michael's age or younger. Lily Andres. Emily has never spoken to her, but their daily schedules have often overlapped and that's how she knows her name. The little boy must be her brother. Everyone is watching her now, watching as they try to calm her down and take her outside of the dining hall. Emily can only assume that she's committed one of the major offenses of the camp; either eating less or more than your portion.
“I can't let my brother starve because of a stupid rule!” Lily shrieks. Her voice is scratchy, hoarse. “Damn this camp! Damn every bit of it!” And with that, she and her brother are gone. Emily doesn't know where they take them, but she here's a click of a gun, a scream, and another click. And then there is a voice, cold, icy, male, that comes on the loudspeaker.
“Attention everyone. Lily and Connor Andres have violated rule three of this camp and are now dead. Just to clarify, trying to give away your portion or accepting an extra portion from another is a direct violation of this rule. If you break any camp rules, you will be killed. Now, if everyone would please return to their compartments. We will start course work for the day at five-thirty.”
Silence.
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