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Bittersweet



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Thu May 24, 2007 10:51 pm
Dark Lordess says...



I really like your story! :D

...I unlocked the door anyway and poked my head outside; both eager and afraid to see what had made the noise; hoping that I wasn't about to get beheaded.

There just beneath the window was a little brown bird, laying sprawled awkwardly in the grass.


Oops... they should both be door.

It's a very good story. Keep writing please! :P
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Wed May 30, 2007 1:40 am
ShadowofLight says...



Hey I got the door/window thing. She was looking out the [b]door[/b] over at her bedroom [b]window[/b] and the bird was on the ground below the [b]window[/b]. Right?

This is a great story. I cannot wait to read more.
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