This is just the basic beginnings of an action story i am working on. I hope you enjoy and all critiques are welcome!
Prologue
The alarm began its screeching and flood lights burst into life as a small figure ran across the landing field. Soldiers poured out of every door, guns loaded heading for cars or running after the figure on foot. As the first guard reached the figure, she spun around, knocking the man out instantly. The woman grabbed the gun and began to shoot across the running soldiers. Every bullet met it’s target as a line of soldiers fell to the ground writhing in pain.The figure dropped the gun and fled out into the night towards the fence.
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Captain Brenig waited outside the general’s office still holding his loaded gun. He walked through the door and stopped in front of the desk and saluted. Behind the desk sat a middle aged man in his forties with emotionless grey eyes and brown hair. His face was clean shaven but his hair was bedraggled as though he had just got out of bed, which Captain Brenig realised, he probably had. The general lifted his head and looked at the Captain for a few minutes in silence, just the sound of the alarm and the distant clattering of the trucks on grave filling the room.
‘What happened Captain?’ the General asked, his raspy voice sending chills down Brenig’s spine.
‘She escaped sir’ He replied, trying to hold the General’s gaze.
The General exploded. His rage erupting out in a series of wild gestures and spluttering.
‘I know she escaped! What I want to know is how she managed to get out of her room, passed twenty specially trained field officers and out of the base!'
‘We don’t know how sir. We only know that all the soldiers were found unconscious. Properly knocked out before they could sound the alarm.’ Brenig replied, flinching from the General's anger.
‘How long ago did she breach the perimeter?’
‘We estimate around fifteen minutes, sir. She will not have made it far through the forest at this time of night.
The General lifted his head and turned to face the Captain, the anger in his eyes pierced through him before he could turn away.
‘Do you forget who you are dealing with? Are there any casualties?’
‘Thirty wounded, two dead. Though not by her hand. They were accidents when tracking her.’
‘Well captain, this is what I want you to do. I want two squads patrolling the forest and a perimeter set up around the city. Nobody gets in or out. I also want every airport, bus station and port closed of. Anyway she could get out I want sealed. Do you understand me Captain? I want her back by dawn,’
The general was breathing heavy now and had slowly moved around his desk until he was stood in front of the Captain.
‘Yes sir!’ Brenig answered, saluting. He swiftly turned and headed for the door.
‘And Captain’
Brenig turned to see the General standing by the window, his cold eyes looking at the chaos ranging below, ‘I want her brought back alive!’
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