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- SOCKS
rapscallion
looked all around, frantically
he over all the people going and coming
again, in
frightened but lip
that grunts wore
his right arm; the mark
frightened to the point of cold feet him all the same.
No one came to answer the boy’s guttural screams of agony as the skin of his palm was raked off.
He’d be denied many of his rights by the Russians; denied of the rights that at once, he never knew he could have had.
Today he would be
if the states hadn’t been done away with,
had a hope
Maybe they were weeping for the poor boy, victim of Grizzly discipline action, like so many other criminals with flayed palms, broken fingers, slashed backs, and other wounds.
,how many Grizzlies had to work security detail as a side job,
crowing
taking order’s
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