ZZAP wrote:Your faeries are structurally unbalanced however. You need to know exactely what they stand for, what they do, and what are their limitations. As a writer, each and every character and individual in the story has their role, you need to act upon this role as if you were in their shoes. Even if you didn't have faerie "X", a variable, do a certain task in your novel, you want to know your characters so much that you would be able to tell me want faerie "X" would do. In this way, you are able to just able to manipulate their surroundings and environment, and the characters speak for themselves. You are a writer, and writers write what they picture.
-Z
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