I was not sure whether to put this in action or fantasy, because it is a cross between both.... So I ended up putting it in here.
Prologue updated and changed a lot!
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I crouched low to the stone floor. At the moment it felt more like ice, causing the cold to cut into my bare feet and drive up my leg. Shivering, I pressed closer to the wall and tried to listen, but all I could hear was the murmur of voices. These castle walls weren't as thick as others I have been to, but they were definitely thick enough.
“Calman, he’s…making decisions on his…he can do…” Mama’s steady voice came. Most people would think women should have soft, quiet voices, but Mama’s was hard and confident. She needed to be strong for the town, and keeping her voice was important in doing so, she had always said that.
I guess being the queen effects the way you live and act a lot. And wanting to be king. I heard my brother say a few words but couldn't catch what they were. And then it was quiet.
Knowing something was wrong I moved backward a foot or so right before the door flew open. Mama’s tall, delicate frame walked out. It was hard to see in the dim light, but I could tell that her waist long blonde hair had been braided and wrapped up in a bun.
My brother came out next, his bolder figure looking awkward and clumsy besides Mama. I watched the two turn their backs on me and walk away, holding my breath. They hadn’t found me! They continued walking down the hallway, Mama’s silver dress just barely brushing the floor; Calman’s robes trailing behind him.
“Kohan?” I jumped and spun around to face the five year old girl behind me. My heart pounded and my skin itched from the sudden fright.
“Zinthia! What are you doing out of bed?” I hissed. Her brown curls bounced as she reached up to tug at my sleeve, her eyes accusing.
“But you were out of bed too!” She whined, and I put a finger to her lips to quiet her. Looking back I swooped her up and started walking down the hallway.
“I know, Zin. But that doesn’t mean you can too.” Her curls tickled my neck as she laid her head on my shoulder and yawned.
“Can I sleep with you tonight, Ko?” She murmured drowsily. I smiled and nodded, noticing the teddy bear she was clutching against her breast. It was worn from so many years of wear and tear. It had been mine before, and before that it had been Lilli’s-my seventeen year old sister. Zinthia was the cutest girl I had ever seen. Her cheeks were just red enough, her eyes the right shade of brown to melt your heart.
But she wasn’t cuter than Valeria. No one was. I closed my eyes and breathed in. The air had suddenly turned to glue at the thought of her. Which was why I mustn’t do that. Banishing the thoughts to the corners of my mind, I padded quietly past Lilli’s door.
Unlike our ancestors before us, we had an acceptionally small family. Calman- twenty, Lilli- seventeen, me- thirteen, Nian- twelve, and Zinthia- five. Only five people. Mama was the sister of six boys and three girls, and Papa’s family was even larger. He had seven brothers and nine sisters.
I stopped abruptly, almost passing my room. I crept inside and slid Zinthia under the covers, before snaking in besides her. She hugged the bear tighter and smiled happily. I smiled too, and stared out the window. The stars were like diamonds, scattered across a black canvas. The moon glowed a transparent blue, and it comforted me to know it was just up there, laying down a path for Valeria, guiding her safely home. Wherever she thought that was.
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