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Chapter 2
In heaven an argument is just ending between God and a very stubborn angel.
“Please spare her, God. She means a lot to me and my whole world.” the angel plies.
“I will do what is right and no other-world angel is going to tell me what to do.” God‘s normally cheery smile is now a angered frown. “Now please leave, Caleb.”
Even Caleb can see that God is holding something from him. He looks deep into the forgiving eyes of God. “Just promise me she’ll be ok, she is dearly needed on Amum.”
God looks at Calebs’ feeble attempt to change his mind. He shakes his head, “I know, Caleb, I know. Now please leave.”
Caleb’s face goes dull. He turns from God, somewhat ashamed, and leaves.
The girl, who is now a lot older than before, is sitting on a stone in the middle of the night. She studies her surroundings, almost as if she is waiting for something or someone. She looks at her watch then back at the dark of the night. A women, around the age of twenty, walks up behind the girl and taps her on the shoulder. The girl turns and sees the women has a mellow yellow glow around the outline of her. She is filled with a calming feeling and smiles. In her mind she thinks about the last time she ever smiled, never. When her eyes get adjusted she sees the women has dark green eyes and light blonde hair. “Mom?” the word almost pops out of her mouth. The women looks around worried, “I don’t have long, but promise me you’ll never give up.” The girl nods slowly, confused. “Good.” The women disappears as fast as she came.
Valerie wakes startled.
“What.. what is it, Val?” Someone whispers from right next to her.
She rubs her eyes the blur the once was the person now is a clear vision of Melody. “Oh just a bad dream, I guess.”
Melody looks Valerie straight in her icy green eyes. “Are you sure you’re ok? The doctor said you wouldn’t really be yourself until you got enough sleep.”
“No really I’m fine.” She shakes her head to completely wake herself up. Suddenly she feels dizzy and collapses on her pillow. She rubs her head and feels a piece of cloth.
“Val! You’re not completely recovered yet!” She rushes over to aid her friend. “The doctor said if you felt any slight pain you should take this.” She shows a medicine cup with a green capsule in it and takes a cup of water off of the stand next to Valerie. “Here, take it.”
Valerie gives her a weird look. “An Advil, the doctor wants me to take an Advil.” She rolls her eyes and takes the pill with a swig of the funny tasting hospital water. Her face scrunches up. “Uggg…that waters nasty.”
Melody giggles at the look on her face. She takes the cups from Valerie’s hands and places them on the stand. Her expression turns serious, “Feeling any better?” her voice full of concern and guilt.
“Yes, a little.” She looks at Melody, her eyes huge and sorrowful. “You don’t have to keep asking me how I feel. And you don’t have to give me anything when I don’t feel good, that’s why I have a nurse. I do have a nurse, right?” Melody nods. “See, nothing to worry about.”
“Yes, I know but I feel that I forced you to go get a movie and that’s why you’re at a hospital, hurt, and not back at my house, fine.” She looks toward the floor.
“Mel, don’t feel bad it’s not your fault I’m here. If I wasn’t acting like an ass then I wouldn’t be here but since I was it’s not your fault at all, if anyone’s it‘s mine.” They bust out laughing.
“That’s true when you’re in a car you act like a jackass!” They both laugh louder.
Valerie’s mom walks in, “Ok you two, Valerie needs to get more sleep if she wants to leave in a few days.”
Melody stops laughing and strolls out of the door. Valerie stops laughing as her mom sits on the corner of her bed.
“I brought soup, in case you’re hungry.” Valerie looks at the bowl of tomato soup, her favorite, and smiles at her mom.
She takes the soup and gobbles it down. She hands it to her mom and falls asleep quickly. Her mom kisses Valerie’s forehead and walks away.
Valerie is running in a field, she isn’t being chased yet she runs faster. She stops when she gets to a forest, a very scary looking forest. An unfriendly vine pops out of the forest and tries to grab a hold of Valerie’s arm. She catches it and pulls it off. Suddenly she turns toward where she was running from. Someone in a long black robe is running up to her. She lets out a loud, painful and agonizing screech. The person snickers and grabs Valerie. “No one can hear you, my dear.” She screams louder as they pull off their hood on their head. Before she can get a look of their face……
She wakes, sweaty and hot.
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