wow, this is really good. i like the end of the first paragraph (in the first story), and the entire chapter was great, altho the last couple paragraphs had me confused a bit.
in the second part...
wow, the dream was a great idea.
but i was just thinking, does she ever get scared? i mean, you mentioned when she was a kid, so didn't seeing people getting killed ever scare her? just curious...
other than that, it's a good story...is it at all a horror?
cuz the second part did kind of seem like it...i don't know
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