Here's an actual chapter of my new novel; sorry for cluttering up Fantasy with all these pieces, but I promise from now on, it's going to be all in chapter order!
There's a prologue too, but I'm not too happy with it, so here goes with Chapter 1.
EDIT: Ahh no, actually this isn't complete. I found it too short, so what I was planning for Chapter 2 feels better here. So this is actually the first part of Chapter 1. *slaps self*
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The boats made little noise as they glided across the dark ocean, apart from the occasional splatter as the oars went in and out of the water. The night had been chosen well, as it was pitch black, no moon there to disrupt the advantage of darkness. Weather was perfect too; no disruptive winds and it was relatively warm, at least for this early in the year. So the two boats smoothly progressed towards the awaiting beach, and their passengers made ready for arrival.
On the first stood a tall man. He had a crude telescope out and was watching their destination calmly. His face was one of concern and worry. The men behind him were solemn and silent, some checking weapons, others staring nonchalantly into the distance. The tall man turned round and whispered, “It’s time, get ready. We need to be careful, something appears to be strange.” The men took no surprise to these news, such missions often went awry, and most just nodded indifferently. But they stood up and prepared themselves, except the rower. The same happened on the second boat. Both were full of six men and they were just seconds from landing. The tall leader signalled silently to his men to split into scout the area after they left the boat, and search for potential dangers.
A soft bump and they were ashore, ten men jumping out, leaving two to protect the boats. They quickly split into three groups, working quickly. Two groups went east and west, and the larger group went forward. With them was the tall leader, who had snatched a note from his pocket and was reading it carefully. His mind was engrossed in thought; the writing was vague, perhaps he didn’t mean tonight at all? Too late to forget it now, may as well wait now we’re here. He was distracted by the return of the first group.
“No sign of him, Rav, we’ve searched past all those dunes,” the speaker’s hand waved over to the right, “but there’s nothin. Maybe we got it wrong?”
The tall man didn’t reply. His name was Ravin and he was worried. Maybe they’d be tricked? It was perfectly possible for the contact to have been lying and playing them off to the authorities all the time, but he was one of the older ones and had been loyal in the past. But a bag of gold coins could change a man’s heart, and if he had fallen all his men would be captured and strung up on a rope. Along with him. It wasn’t something he intended to happen.
The second group returned a minute later, but the news was the same, no sign of the contact. The note had said, Dozen after Full Moon, usual place, usual time. Two score gold. He had assumed it meant days after the full moon, as hours was too short and weeks too long. Usual place was not always this beach, but it had been the last two times, and as for the time, it was always midnight. So why wasn’t he here? He’s sold you out, Ravin told himself. Tip-offs were frequent and often misled, sometimes purposely, but the army was still eager to capture any of them they could. This beach was relatively unknown and so they’d be safe, he hoped. Or by tomorrow he’d be struggling for breath and hanging above the ground.
“Rav?” said a bearded man, “What we gonna do?”
“We wait,” he said simply, because there was nothing else to do. And they all knew it. They needed the food, and they had to believe he was coming. Ravin doubted it though. All the army had to do was offer him more than forty gold pieces and he’d tell them anything. They were totally on the back foot and he knew it. The truth hit him hard. People were relying on them. Women and children were starving and without this shipment, he knew, his conscience would weigh even more.
A few weeks before Ravin had go on a similar mission, the instructions were simple, meet the contact, pay the money, receive the food, leave. As it always had been. It was a trap. He had narrowly escaped with several other men. Ten hadn’t, lying wounded or dead, he had left them on the beach, screaming, bleeding and betrayed. But that was his life. Survival. At least he had got the food, not just being a small consolation; it had kept hundreds of others alive.
At the expense of others. Was this how it was always going to be? Men like him died for others. Why did the proper authorities take no action? The food shortage could be solved easily, but the Norfor High Council said they just had no food to spare anywhere in the kingdom. The worst lie that Ravin had ever experienced. Yet, still, he was, but his own admittance, a selfish man. He’d never have imagined himself risking his own skin for people he had connection too, no responsibility for it. But if he didn’t do it, he’d starve too. It was well-paid work, if he was truthful, and the money allowed him to buy enough food despite the famine, because the cities were well stocked, and despite the guards not allowing in anyone, he found it easy enough to give them the slip. But this wasn’t the main reason, there were other jobs.
No, to be perfectly honest, he did it for the exhilaration, the adrenaline, and the chase. No job did it better. Having no real connection or love for the Norfor High Council, it gave him no end of pleasure to take food from their greedy hands, and watch them helplessly attempt to control the situation. They sat down. The sand was soft and scattered with wild weeds, yet it was still comfortable. Compared to the hardness of the boat, it was more like a luxury. It left Ravin more time to collect his thoughts, as well. Some of the men decided to play some cards. He declined to play, and sat a bit away from them. Never was a gambling man.
He reached for his canteen at his waist and poured the cooling water down his desperate throat. The fresh sensation relaxed him and he lay back into the sand, letting his black hair settle into a comfortable position. And he stared up at the stars, twinkling and pretty in the dark night. They were almost entrancing…
The hours passed slowly, all the time edging towards the sunrise. If they were left here by then, their bodies would stain the sandy beach. So there was little time left. Still, nobody complained at the wait. Most of them were hungry, most of them had families back in the Isles, expecting. Coming back there empty handed was an embarrassment and a disappointment. But when you came back holding barrels, the crowds flocked and cheered, and for that day, you were a hero.
“Someone coming, Rav,” said one of the men, running back from his original position at the north of the beach, “I think it’s him. Bloody late, but man’s here.”
Ravin just nodded. They were sometimes late. Not this late usually though, and Ravin felt a strange chill down his spine again. He didn’t like the unusual. It usually meant something had changed, and change was usually for the worse.
The man appeared over a dune, dressed like a peasant with dull clothes. He was quite fat, and looked happy with himself. Ravin sighed. He obviously had no trouble finding food to satisfy his overgrown stomach.
“My friends…” he started, but as shocked by Ravin’s sudden interruption.
“No friend of ours leaves us here for hours without notice. Show us the stuff now or I’ll leave your corpse here for the birds,” Ravin said quickly.
The man regained his composure, and said, “I had other business. Surely you must understand! I am here now, and that’s all that matters.”
“I hope that business wasn’t swapping coin with any commanders,” Ravin muttered with an accusatory tone, looking the man up and down suspiciously, “Otherwise…” he patted his sword hilt with a smile.
“I have always been honest!” the man replied, but not with much veracity, he looked much more concerned with the weapon at Ravin’s belt, and beckoned them to follow him, turning to go, with just a faint hint of sweat forming on his brow.
“Sheyas and Reina, stay here with the boats. Rest of you come with me. Tantra, scout ahead. Make sure this filth ain’t lying to us.” They nodded, and went to their positions. Tantra, the man who had reported the initial sighting, moved off swiftly ahead, his eyes never stopping, his head turning ceaselessly. He was soon lost in the distance.
They made their route north across the dunes and were soon onto grass, in the form of a steep hill. The going wasn’t hard however, the path was yielding and they made quick progress. Soon, they had met the top and they stared down the other side. There, was a city, lights glistening in the darkness. Norforda, City of Stars. Ravin stared hard into its faint outline. It wasn’t the first time he had looked upon the capital or Norfor.
“Erm…excuse me….mister..?” stuttered the man, in obvious confusion as to how to address Ravin.
“Ravin,” he said without emotion.
“Mister Ravin, I would like to see…some of my gold now,” he said, his body action displaying sheer nervousness, as he took a step back, “If that’s okay.” He was clearly scared of the tall, hard man.
“Here’s half,” he said impassively, grasping inside his jacket and throwing a jingling brown bag into the man’s chest, “Other half when we get the stuff out safely.”
The man hesitated, but then nodded, and carried on the walk. The path tilted to the right hand side, as if it were to move away from the city, half a mile away. But Ravin sincerely doubted the food would be hidden in there, it was much easier to have it outside. Firstly, they’d have to sneak in eight armed men, and then they’d have to sneak out barrels of food. No, Ravin decided, it was most probably in some cave nearby, or some sort of hideaway. Either way, Ravin couldn’t help feeling a sense of disappointment, as it became clear they were not going to enter Norforda. Sometimes it was good to relive old times.
The hill dipped more so as they went down. It all felt very strange to Ravin, they could not see the ground they were heading towards, and it felt as if hey were descending into a sea of darkness. And anything, absolutely anything, could be waiting at the bottom. He tensed himself.
So that’s why, when he saw the torches burst into flame, when he heard the twang of an arrow being fired, when he smelt the ambush, he threw himself to the floor. The pain was worth it, he glimpsed an arrow flying over the top of him, the torches that had ignited had illuminated their surroundings.
He got up quickly and took in what was happening. It had been a trap. The fires had been lit by armoured men who were wielding swords and looking pretty pleased with themselves. Several archers, in dark clothing were firing at the isolated group. Two of his men were down already, the arrows taking their toll. Luckily the fires hadn’t turned away the cloak of darkness, and they were still partially hidden. And his men were fighting back, a few had got their bows, and they had the advantage here, the armoured men were totally clear next to the fires and totally vulnerable. One man died as an arrow slammed into his neck, blood spurting onto his neighbour, who had taken one in his thigh, and had collapsed to the ground. The rest had charged in to his other men, and a fast and bloody combat was ensuing in front of Ravin.
Ravin withdrew both his swords and coolly addressed the situation. Don’t panic, his mind reminded him. Take out the first man nearby. The man was charging wildly, his sword high above his head in a rapturous fashion. Raving stepped in to meet him, and eyeing his target carefully, deflected his high attack. The second sword sliced across his neck at the same time. The man dropped. Ravin went in to meet his second opponent who had approached more carefully, loosening his grip and holding his sword outwardly. But suddenly he screamed and charged forward, and Ravin, disturbed by the sudden attack, lost his balance.
He managed to deflect the first blow, from luck rather than skill. He had tripped on the body behind him and his arm had raised his sword. The parry was weak though, and his sword slipped from his hand as he toppled to the ground. But his wits were unhurt; rolling to the side he missed the stab by his attacker. He quickly regained his feet, and the man, struggling to withdraw his sword, didn’t see him. So he slid the sword through the man’s side. The man spat blood and dropped backwards, his hand outstretched, as if still holding on to the threads of life.
Ravin grabbed the sword out of the ground with ease. The fight around him had stilled, his men had beaten back the attack, barely. Three of his men were lying on the floor; dead or wounded he could not tell. The rest sported cuts and blows.
Just then, a hair on his neck prickled. Without thinking, he switched his body round, reversed his right wrist and stabbed the sword, backwards, into the awaiting stomach. It obliged, and the man stopped dead, his sword clattering on the floor. He stood there, choking. Ravin casually pulled the sword out and walked away. The man stumbled for a while, but then fell. Another unnecessary death.
He didn’t have to talk to his men. They knew the risks, they knew the sacrifices, they knew the costs. He simply nodded respectfully.
Their ambushers had scattered. They had won, but he wouldn’t call it a victory. His men were tired, injured and betrayed. They had no contact, they had no food. They had no friends here. They had to get out. The boats!
“Quick, back to the beach!” he said, and dashed off back the way they had come. His men followed, knowing their only way to survival was back over the ocean from whence they had come.
He was a quick sprinter. It did not unduly concern him that he was much faster than his men, and soon a large gap was made, his prime concern was with the boats. It was entirely likely that a second attack had been made on Sheyas and Reina. His mind flickered to Tantra, who was missing. Perhaps he had sold them out? Doubtful, he reconsidered, he was always quiet, but he didn’t look like a traitor.
At last he reached the sand. After the hard drumming on the ground, the give of the dunes was relieving, but it dramatically slowed his pace. However he did his best, and his men soon followed him. But he didn’t have to get too close to smell what he had feared.
The scent of death lingered on the air. His eyes confirmed it; four dead corpses resting near the boats. Or more accurately, the remains of the boats. Strips of wood floated on the waves, surrounded by smaller counterparts. Their escape route had sunk with the rest of the boat.
He didn’t know what hit him harder, the fact he was responsible for the death of four of his men, or the fact that there was now no escape from here. They had killed several soldiers; they would be hunted down like dogs when the sun rose. He gulped.
Whichever way he looked at it, he was in trouble.
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