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Your didn't need to seperate the dialogue. IM SORRY! You can hit me for being a format nazi! haha but seriously this was fantastic I absolutely LOVE what you're doing with theses characters. And FINALLY a name to the unnamed hero! Can't wait to read more seriously keep it up!"You are just beautiful my girl."
"You seem perfect for my son, please don't go breaking his heart." Soledad looked hopeful
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