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Chapter 2: The Setup of Advancement


The wormhole then spit the Cro-Magnonians, out into a new time period where the people of the race were then called Greeks, they had basic understanding of the philosophical nature, advanced in all things mathematics and scientific and basic in all things judicial and political.
One of the first things the New Greeks contemplated or pondered about deeply was the 2nd version of the 1st government and which form of it to take. There was a hierarchy, a tier-based government, anarchy, no government, dictatorship, do what one person says, or a king and queen based government decided upon by lineage.
They also contemplated a democracy or a congressional government. So, a number of the currently greatest minds in the New Greeks, about one thousand, came to a meeting place to convene, once they were lectured for five minutes on each type of government, they took to a secret ballot, and took a vote of yes or no. They were then asked why they agreed or disagreed upon the choices of government which went along for hours. They finally agreed upon a fortnight long trial of each choice. First would be hierarchy. The only problem with that was deciding upon who would be in which tiers. One New Grecian suggested that they organize the tiers by a person’s intelligence. The king and queen would be smartest, and the next smartest before them would be next in line. And the lowest would be well, the lowest. That would be decided by a oral test testing memory.
The king and queen surprisingly, had a rock bottom of the food chain understanding of all things in mathematics and science and an almost deity like understanding of all things of the philosophical and of ponderance in nature. The next in line through lineage, the underlings, would have a similar intelligence structure to the king and queen, in the machinations of their mind. This would be called a geniomonarchy. People would do anything to be king and queen and they meant ANYTHING and EVERYTHING.
Here is how the test would go down. Men would be tested before women. They would be asked a series of 100 long and short and multichoiced. The best from the two sexes would be king and queen. There would be the same process for everyone else. . Men would be tested before women. They would be asked a series of 100 long and short and multichoiced. The best from the two sexes would be the underlings from tier to tier to tier. And then there would be the underling’s underlings. Men would be tested before women. They would be asked a series of 100 long and short and multichoiced. The best from the two sexes would be the underling’s underlings. This would be from the top of the geniomonarchy pyramid to the low, low, bowels from under it. The first new act the geniomonarchy passed under its control was that there must be schools built in case an heir to the geniomonarchy is unfound, the next found pupil who has completed his schooling and is tested like this… Men would be tested before women. They would be asked a series of 100 long and short and multichoiced. The best from the two sexes would be king and queen … AND SO ON AND SO FORTH… Hospitals would next be built… then libraries… then banks… then… houses… then… public baths and so on and so forth… “My public will always come first,” the king valiantly told his public. The crowd was overbearing in its cheers and sometimes even its jeers.
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