Snoink wrote:Where did you stop reading?
Once more, she stepped to the mirror. She smiled and watched her fingers dance along her reflected face.
shubhiloves2write wrote:I read till ' Sandpaper stay still.........". i left in the middle because I want a rating so I could read it. I foyu could do that I am ready to read it.Till whatever I read, I liked it.
Beyond the fence there was a row rundown apartments.
Snoink wrote:Karsten>> Thanks! Easiest critique you had to do, right?
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