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Soldiers



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Wed Aug 11, 2010 10:34 pm
DAISYtheauthor says...



"It's been been 18 years since I first saw his face...

Now I regret seeing him again because I know I just killed his heart."
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Wed Aug 11, 2010 11:00 pm
fictionfanatic says...



What you wrote on here is short and yet interesting.

What you wrote on the attachment (I don't know if I was supposed to read that, but I did) is even better.

I love it already. PM me when you come out with more.
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