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Prologue
"Not now, I have to drive you home," Ember told Sarah. They'd just gotten home from Sarah's graduation party, she'd gone through second grade twice leaving her as a super senior. Summer had just kicked off and they were out celebrating. They'd been best friends since they were born, though it's kind of hard not to be when you're a twin. Ember refused the drink, knowing that it was illegal to drink under the age of 21. "C'mon, one drink, it's just rum and coke," Sarah was good at coaxing people and even though she knew she shouldn't, Ember took the drink and finished it off. "Now let's go Sarah, that's your 23rd drink and I've had one, please let me take you home," Ember smiled at her sister when she finally agreed. "Thank you," Sarah said as they turned onto the highway. "Anytime," Ember never let her sister go drink without having her there. "No really, thank you," she repeated. "Like I sa.." Ember's sentence was cut off by Sarah's scream as the truck in front of them swerved. She saw the vehicle in front of them a little too late. They were airborne for what seemed like a minute before the car crashed into the ground. Ember's world went silent.
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