Young Writers Society

While there may be a giant asteroid impact, I would rather think not. Clearly this planet can be redeemed; there is no need to believe the worst.

If the worst should come, I know this: in God's eyes, I am not expendable.
I suppose that's an unpopular view. At some time its truth or untruth will be confirmed.

As for impressions. The video was very impressive indeed. I still wonder, though- who
will be singing while the asteroid comes down? Perhaps it might've been more effective
if it were executed silently.

Well if the world were to end and it stuck with past sayings then wouldn't the fat lady finally sing? I mean come on, it only makes sense.

XD at matthew.

Interesting.....was this one of those short response to a movie assignments? If so, I think you did well.

Otherwise, I don't see the point of such a short piece.........

And yes, I know it's been a while since you posted this. I'm trying to get it off the 1 review list. Yay!

And I think this is a good response. Do you go to public school? If so, (and even if you dont') I applaud you. You go bro.

No nitpicks, you don't need my help on grammar and spelling. Well done.