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Mon Jun 20, 2011 4:22 am
GracieBee62 says...



It's been thirteen tedious days. But now, it's my time. It's today.

*TODAY.

Five letters. A million different emotions. One meaning.

I can be myself for the next month. I can be ME. Surrounded by all the people I love so much. Is it just me, or does nothing even compare to that sentence?

My smile is wider, my laugh is more heartfelt, and my actions are honest. I am happy.
- baby, please don't go -
- who do you think you are? -
- i was enchanted to meet you -
- you're the only one who's got enough of me to break my heart -
- until the morning sun you're mine, all mine -
- there's only 1 way 2 say those 3 words 4 you... i love you -
  





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Mon Jun 20, 2011 5:32 am
ratularay says...



hi GracieBee,
it was a very gud thought............i liked it very much
i am a new member.................so plzzzzzzzzzz help me with your reviews
  





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Mon Jun 27, 2011 5:09 pm
fictionfanatic says...



It's been thirteen tedious days. But now, it's my time. It's today.

*TODAY.

Five letters. A million different emotions. One meaning.

I can be myself for the next month. I can be ME. Surrounded by all the people I love so much. Is it just me, or does nothing even compare to that sentence?

My smile is wider, my laugh is more heartfelt, and my actions are honest. I am happy.


I like this, I truly do. I'm a tad confused to what you're talking about, but it's good. You show good emotion and let readers into your heart a little bit.

Keep up the good work.

Love and other things,
fictionfanatic
Live, Love, Laugh
  





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Mon Jul 18, 2011 10:23 am
Chulel says...



I very much liked this!! Not sure why, but I think it's because you describe what it feels like to be free, and i can feel it as you're describing it!

Beautiful!!
For the rest of my life I want to reflect on what light is.
- Albert Einstein
  








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