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"This is our decision, to live fast and die young... Yeah it's overwhelming, but what else can we do? Get jobs in offices and wake up for the morning commute?
The models will have children, we'll get a divorce, find some more models; everything must run its course!
I like it a lot, but I don't know how well a college would like it. I don't know that much about college, though, so maybe they would. I REALLY liked it. I liked the word choice and theme. Good job.
When I was young, I admired clever people. Now that I am old, I admire kind people. -Abraham Joshua Heschel
Bol, colleges want to see what you can offer and what you've done and will do; you're an investment to them. Humour often misses the review committees unless the college you apply for is looking for that. Keep that in mind.
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