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I found this so bogged-down with details that it took me a few readings to understand what you were saying. Granted, my mental capacity is a little frazzled right now, but I think it would be a little less confusing if you gave an overall picture of how the novel is formatted (POVs, etc.) before diving into specific plot details. Maybe if this was longer, then there would be more room for specifics, but as it is it feels like you're jamming them in to space that would be better occupied by more general observations.The narrative follows two threads of a man's consciousness in first person. The opening picks up with the naked, nearly-blind Finch who is distraught after a storm tears across his patch of land. Worse, as he stumbles about, he finds that a couple of hikers have wandered close to the cave he lives in.
In the next chapter, the narrative takes us back to see Finch sit at his desk where he's nearly forgotten by everyone around him. He sits in his corner and runs several made-up blogs in the voices of various kinds of people. He sometimes manages to plug the product his company is selling, but more often than not continues building relationships for these imaginary bloggers and their not imaginary readers. He is no longer approached any of the co-workers that surround him and unsure whether they even remember his name, until a new manager calls him in to fire him.
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