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10 Napo Poem

You say I'll be rejected by others
but don't you see
you've already rejected me
you're the one who let me go first
you're the one
that let me know
I wasn't good enough
I wasn't the perfect image that you wanted
I wasn't the trophie
that you could show to the hole world
and be proud of
there for you now get angry at me
because of who I am
and you're a hippocrate
that I should know longer talk to
but yet we live in the same house
so how do I get away from you
how do I egnore you
when you purposefully hurt me
just so you can get a buzz out of it
because you enjoy
seeing my pain
but one day that will change.
Oh you just have to wait, and peace will come to you!
  





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Tue Apr 11, 2023 3:44 am
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11 Napo Poem : The One Who Loves Me

Clouds are like my heart
empty and broken
but I know that one day
the light will shine threw
and I'll know longer feel this way

and when summer comes
and the flowers bloom
I hope that happiness will come
and know pettle shell fall
for there being held up by joy

this is when I will regain my strength
and even though I don't have wings
I shell learn to fly
high up to the atmosphere
past the many stars in the sky

and towards the heart
of the one who loves me the most
they lift me up even I don't call on them
they forgive me
even for my biggest sins

so I'll give my heart to those
who truely care
and even when life tears us down
we are unstoppable
because we are one when we are together.
Oh you just have to wait, and peace will come to you!
  





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12 Napo Poem

Something is making me
Stay awake at night

Is it that I feel free
Like I can do anything
And know one will see or judge

Or is it because
I feel safer
Because know one can hurt me

I don't understand how it's helping me though
Because I'm tired and in need of rest
My eyes are struggling to stay open
Yet sleep never comes

I'm in this endless battle with myself
If I try to get some rest
It turns into yanking my hair
And quite screaming

This doesn't happen every night
Sometimes it's easy to sleep
But other times it
Sends me into a state of complete
And utter madness.
Oh you just have to wait, and peace will come to you!
  





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Wed Apr 12, 2023 11:21 am
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Spoiler! :
doss amazing poetry i really likes the lines 'Clouds are like my heart/
empty and broken' you are doing great and really pushing yourself keep it up
"i dont slay i slaughter, luke i am your father..." ~fatherfig
  





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13 Napo Poem

Empty pages
And know pen to paint it in words
Know colour to bring to its sorrows

Day by day
And nothing's happened
It hasn't even been opened

It was bought here but never used
Almost as if it was being abused
But it wasn't at all amused

People and writers
have you forgotten how paper works
It is not there to collect many different dusts

There is a reason it has an opening
For all your exploring
It's the very thing
that makes it existing.

Spoiler! :
thank you @tatteredbones I'm glad your liking it all so far!
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14 Napo Poem

One, two,
I'm so done with you
Three, four,
don't just slam the door
five, six,
I'm so over this
seven, eight,
don't just throw the plate
Nine, Ten,
Won't you just grab the pen
Eleven, Twelve,
all he thinks about is himself
Thirteen, Fourteen,
outside looks daunting
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15 Napo Poem

I won't let you fall
and I will never let you go
I'll hold on to you
for eternaty
and you will hold on to me
and never let me go astray
even through hard times
will stay togather
even through the fear
that one of us may get hurt
will still be with one another forever.
Oh you just have to wait, and peace will come to you!
  





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16 Napo Poem

Hurt shame
oh you mock me
why are you so cruel
does it give you plessure
to see someone suffer
pain is my enemy
but you made it my reality
so why do you hurt me so much
do you think this is funny
do you think this is fair
I'm a call you a liar
and a cheater
until someone proves otherwise.
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17 Napo Poem
Do roses bloom
with failing petals
and does love form
from a broken wound
oh I don't believe this is how it goes
oh I don't believe this is how love starts
you came and it was all a play
you just wanted me for nothing
oh it was all a joke
you never wanted it to be serious
so why did I care
so much when you left
worried that you where hurt
by me.
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18 Napo Poem
Oh babe
when you look at me that way
I just gotta know
this is forever
I want you to stay with me
never leave my side
because we are just meant to be
you don't have to tell me how this ends
because I can already see it happening
you and I
rapped around each others arms
looking into each others eyes
like there's know tomorrow
oh it's never the end
when your with me
and our love is to be guarded
so it can never be broken.
Oh you just have to wait, and peace will come to you!
  





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Tue Apr 18, 2023 3:47 am
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alliyah says...



Spoiler! :
You cover such a rich range of emotion in you poetry from love to loss to anger to hopelessness. I think 7 and 9 are some of my favorites so far, but there are a lot of good reads here.

Also this is lovely how you phrased & connected this:

Do roses bloom
with failing petals
and does love form
from a broken wound


You're doing absolutely wonderful this month Doss! looking forward to reading more.
you should know i am a time traveler &
there is no season as achingly temporary as now
but i have promised to return
  





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19 Napo Poem
Getting up for school
is hard all on it own
why it so hard to do though
when every other day
fly's by without a trace

but that's not the hardest part
what about those day's
where you know you got a math's assignment
that you have to show up for
but your scared of failing

all I can say to you
is that you need to believe in yourself
don't let anyone tell you
that your not going to make it
because your better then they say you are.

Spoiler! :
Thank you so much @alliyah for the kind words, I'm really hoping to finish Napo this year. :)
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20 Napo Poem/Lyrics

What do you hate about me
is it my brown hair
that I try to keep so perfect

or is it my blue-ish green-brown eyes
that stair at you non-blinkingly
and seem to shoot daggers at you

Or is it my face
that turns red with anger
and absolute rage

or is it my fingers
that I hurt myself with non-stop
just to try to keep myself under control

or is it because I don't walk in a straight line
and do exactly what you say
when you say it

I'm not a doll
that you can throw around
and bully because I will fight back!
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21 Napo Poem

From dawn to dusk
The trees whisper there silent songs
even the stars twinkle a symphony of music
as the creatures try to blend with
synchronized rhythm
and the ocean waves rise
and come down like drums
and the birds then join the coris
with there beautiful songs
and as the earth play's it's many wonders
the sun shell bring dawn
and as it lowers
the moon shell bring night fall
and then comes the silents of midnight.
Oh you just have to wait, and peace will come to you!
  





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22 Napo Poem

Dust speckled floors
and moldy walls
and old wooden doors
and cracked window pains
and broken picture frames
and rotton silver pans
these are the houses
that have been long time forgotten
and abandoned
with know memories to be kept
for when they are all demolished.
Oh you just have to wait, and peace will come to you!
  








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