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Paper Boy



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Tue Jul 05, 2005 2:59 pm
Chevy says...



Paper Boy
By Morgan Harper

Verse One
saturday
same routine
goind down
the same old streets

Pre Chorus
tell me what you're thinking
what are you thinking

Chorus
your closet hopes
your distant dreams
life is harder
than it seems
do you know peace
do you know joy
(tell me) what's on your mind
paper boy

Verse Two
very nice
brand new bike
you're still out
the same old route

Pre Chorus
tell me what you're thinking
what are you thinking

Bridge
pass the stop sign
the highway is clear
did they tell you
you can't get there from here
when there's nowhere to go, it's time to grow up.
  





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Wed Jul 06, 2005 12:44 am
Caligula's Launderette says...



sweet....I really liked the rythm. Wish I could hear the tune...

I really liked the last line...that was my favorite.

cheers CL
Fraser: Stop stealing the blanket.
[Diefenbaker whines]
Fraser: You're an Arctic Wolf, for God's sake.
(Due South)

Hatter: Do I need a reason to help a pretty girl in a very wet dress? (Alice)

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Wed Jul 06, 2005 12:55 am
Chevy says...



thank you so much. i was afraid i wouldn't get any feedback on this but it looks like i did! thanks!
when there's nowhere to go, it's time to grow up.
  





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Wed Jul 06, 2005 11:21 pm
Muse says...



wow, it flows really well. Nice one!
"Sometimes we see a cloud that's dragonish,
A vapour sometimes like a bear or lion,
A towered citadel, a pendant rock,
A forked mountain, or blue promontory,
With trees upon't that nod unto the world,And mock our eyes with air.."
  





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Fri Jul 08, 2005 2:29 pm
Chevy says...



I finally figured out the music for it last night! YAY! But I fell asleep ontop of a electric guitar and an acoustic on my leg...I woke up this morning--I had forgotten it.
when there's nowhere to go, it's time to grow up.
  








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