Young Writers Society

How do I keep my heart from feeling all this pain? (This is a question. And the first letter needed to be capitalized.)
From dropping the tears that want to fall like rain,

Physical scars from the beating of my heart,

Do not show the ones inside, not even a tenth part.

When you think that you have gotten away with it,

Just know, you haven't and it hurts me.

So, don't be surprised when karma finds you and you're all alone (It wasn’t necessary to capitalize “don’t”)
This isn't me being cruel; it's you reaping what you have sown. (A semicolon was supposed to be in place of that comma. A semicolon is used when there are two complete sentences and you want to put them together.)
Don't be afraid from what you have done,

Oh wait I’m talkin’ to myself again, (“I’m” is a contraction. So an apostrophe needs to be there.)
If I were you, I'd run.

You've hurt people without an apology, (without is a full word)
You don't have one friend who would say your eulogy.

Yet every time I see you, my heart melts,

It’s like a curse from within, my heart used to win. (“It’s” is also a contraction.)
Sometimes the most important thing is knowing who to trust,

Like a pane of glass, it is easy to bust.

Oh how blind I was! How angry I feel,

With your lying heart, I just cannot deal.

So goodbye forever, I promise myself,

True friends are my gold, true friends are my wealth.