"Everybody stares, as she goes by 'Cause they can see theflamethat's in her eyes Watch her when she's lighting up the night Nobody knows that she's a lonely girl And it's a lonely world But she gon' let it burn, baby,burn,baby"
I abso, abso, abso, abso, abso, absolutely LOVE this poem/song! It's completely amazing! When I read it it was like a record playing in my head, and it was so strong that I had to pick up my guitar and write it all down! Which means that I kinda' wrote music for the song. I really hope that's okay because I really like this, and really like how it turned out, and I only changed a few things, it was absolutely perfect! Do you play any instruments and music for it yourself, or was it just like a song in your head?
I really, really loved this, and I really hope you're okay with it - and I can send it to you if you want?
Keep writing, and keep amazing me with your amazing skills!
Love,
Be the change you wish to see in the world. - Gandhi
People are always so fake these days and then you start falling into it and people are just all Barbies these days..
"Everybody stares, as she goes by 'Cause they can see theflamethat's in her eyes Watch her when she's lighting up the night Nobody knows that she's a lonely girl And it's a lonely world But she gon' let it burn, baby,burn,baby"
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