500 words is so short! It doesn't help that I tried to crunch a whole second half into my piece while retaining the first half. My story idea is easily executed in like 2000 words, not-so-much 500. But I guess that's why it's the Olympics!
I think what I have at least makes sense now, so I'm going to leave it alone.
Anyone else wish they had like.... 800 more words to work with? XD
you should know i am a time traveler & there is no season as achingly temporary as now
Cheat your landlord if you can and must, but do not try to shortchange the Muse. It cannot be done. You can’t fake quality any more than you can fake a good meal. — William S. Burroughs
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