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Camp NaNo '23: A Winter's Funeral



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You got this, RandomTalks! Wishing you the best with reaching your goal-- nearing a full draft is super impressive!! <3
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WOW. That would be so cool. Having a completed first draft is just... one of the best feelings ever. Not many people can accomplish that!
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Wow, that's great! Good job so far. You can do it :)
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Day 23



Daily Wordcount: 636

Camp NaNo Wordcount: 10153

Today's scenes were mostly just conversations between the siblings, so had a lot of fun while writing!

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"That's because you don't have a social life."

Eve glared at him steadily. "I do have a social life," she turned to Allison, "Tell him I have a social life."

Allison shrugged. "I mean, most days you don't even have a life, so..."

Eve stared at her sister with the utmost betrayal before swiftly getting up from her seat without sparing them a glance.

"I am going to check on Lily, who despite being at least a decade younger than you both, is kind and considerate to her family."

"I mean, the fact that your idea of escape is a seven year old little girl just proves my point, but sure, go ahead."
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Mon Apr 24, 2023 12:12 am
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omg, i love that excerpt xD poor Eve, lol!
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Day 24



Daily Wordcount: 597

Camp NaNo Wordcount: 10.750k

Covered some of the last few lighter scenes today as after they reach home, it will mostly be just one conflict after another. I will definitely miss writing these harmless fights and arguments and hopefully, I will have the opportunity to incorporate some similar scenes before the close of the novella.

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"You are! You are like this giant man-baby who cries when hungry unless someone pats its head and feeds it with a spoon."

Allison just stared. "Where do you even come up with this stuff, man?"
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Day 25



Daily Wordcount: 601

Camp NaNo Wordcount: 11.351k

Struggled a little to really feel it today but still progressed in terms of plot. Although I might end up revising and omitting this part altogether as I don't think we necessarily need all the in-between scenes. Will definitely have to think about a better transition, because right now its looking real rough.

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"I know it must be more difficult for you. I mean, I'm just saying -"

"Please don't tell me how to feel."

"Okay."

"Okay."
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Day 26



Daily Wordcount: 453

Camp NaNo Wordcount: 11.804k

Missed an update!
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Day 27



Daily Wordcount: 527

Camp NaNo Wordcount: 12.331

Did some more planning today and well, I think I need a few more days to complete this thing. I've only just entered the climax and even though most of the development will take place in the sequel, I still want to leave this one with some kind of a resolution. Let's see how much I can cover in the last three days!
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Day 28



Daily Wordcount: 443

Camp NaNo Wordcount: 12.774k

Yep, I am definitely going to need a few more days to wrap things up. The characters just have too much to say right now and it needs to be out there.

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"Do you even think about how your actions hurt the people around you? Do you even care?"

Eve's voice was soft, exhausted.

"Of course, I do!"

"No, you don't. If you did you could never have said what you said out there today," she shook her head, "You are so ignorant, Jake, sometimes I don't even know what to say to you. Sometimes I wonder if its better to say nothing at all. Maybe that'll get you to not view us as enemies all the time."
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I've really been enjoying your updates Random, I hope I get to read a draft of this soon <3
  





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Day 29



Daily Wordcount: 490

Camp NaNo Wordcount: 13.264k

Missed an update!

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Self-reflection was a tiring process and he preferred to engage in it as less frequently as possible.
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Day 30



Daily Wordcount: 753

Camp NaNo Wordcount: 14.017k

Alright, somehow I forgot that April only has 30 days or I am sure I would have written more sincerely yesterday. I am a little disappointed that I did not get to finish the novella, but I feel happy about where it is right now and I am confident it will take only a week (max) to tie up the lose ends.

Nevertheless, I wrote 14k words this month and although it isn't much, this was a rather wholesome journey to ease back into writing!
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Congrats on all that writing, RandomTalks! 14k is amazing! And I'm glad to see that you've gotten back into the writing groove through this :D
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You did amazing! I’m glad I was able to watch your progress unfold throughout the month
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