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Camp July '23: Miscreants + Through the Amber Forest



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Thu Jul 27, 2023 11:35 pm
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Liminality says...



Day 28

Finished coming up with what I needed for the forest and lake. Also drew a rough map (though I'd hardly call it a 'map' xD). What remains of the main locations are a swamp and a second forest. I realise I ended up drifting from 'create a climate system' which was my original goal because I felt like I needed other parts of the world first to figure out how things like the water cycle would work, and eh, given the magical nature of . . . nature, in this setting, a 'realistic' climate system doesn't seem so important anymore.
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Sat Jul 29, 2023 9:56 am
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Day 29

Didn't get this done today
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Sun Jul 30, 2023 3:54 am
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Day 30

Ended up changing the swamp to a marsh. I have the basic details of that second forest and the marsh now. The next thing to do would be to work on revisions: deciding what from the original draft to keep, what to change and how I might want to rearrange the events.
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Mon Jul 31, 2023 12:30 am
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Day 31

Read through and marked up the second draft, until scene 4.
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RandomTalks says...



Congratulations on completing Camp, Lim! You are probably the most consistent Camper I have ever seen and I have really enjoyed following your updates throughout the month!
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Tue Aug 01, 2023 10:50 am
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Thanks so much @RandomTalks! I've really enjoyed following your project, too!
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