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Camp NaNo July '23: NettieWIP



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With her wife of 38 years dead and her lighthouse decommissioned, lighthouse keeper Nettie Harris wants to be left alone to grieve. Unfortunately, the residents of the lakeside village of Forster’s Landing are incapable of staying out of their neighbors’ business. Only Helen Godfrey—stiff-necked, straight-laced head of the village council and founder of the local historical society—treats Nettie as she always has, which is to say with disdain, irritation, and an utter disregard for Nettie's feelings.

When Helen is found dead at the foot of the lighthouse, Nettie feels like the last constant in her life has died, too—even if it was an insufferable constant like Helen. With her home a crime scene and the village police fumbling the investigation, Nettie takes charge of the case herself, soon becoming [embroiled] in a multitude of suspects, too many children, and a young detective who inexplicably seems to like her. But when a second body turns up—the Coast Guard ensign Nettie blames for both her wife’s death and the loss of her beloved lighthouse—Nettie becomes the prime suspect.

Goal: 30,000 words (but if I go hard and finish a first draft, awesome)
  





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I am IN LOVE with this premise and wish you best of luck on your camp NaNo journey!!
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@Plume wrote:I am IN LOVE with this premise and wish you best of luck on your camp NaNo journey!!


Thank you so much! Planning is going shockingly well tonight, so maybe I can perhaps potentially actually in fact pull off a murder mystery!
  





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just waiting patiently for the new Blue book to drop <3
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@Carlito wrote:just waiting patiently for the new Blue book to drop <3


Godwilling this one actually does drop 😅
  





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OH. THIS LOOKS DIFFERENT.
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Snoink wrote:OH. THIS LOOKS DIFFERENT.


IT IS INDEED

...except for the part where the MC is an older woman, the book is full of found family, and it's cozy and allegedly sad
  





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I mean... there is a murder. It already started on a miserable premise...
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Snoink wrote:I mean... there is a murder. It already started on a miserable premise...


liSTEN--
  





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BluesClues attempts a cozy mystery with no magic

I beg your WHAT NOW?!
  





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IcyFlame wrote:
BluesClues attempts a cozy mystery with no magic

I beg your WHAT NOW?!


I KNOW

IT WAS SUPPOSED TO BE WITCHY

AND THEN MY BRAIN WENT AND HAD A TEMPER TANTRUM ABOUT IT BEING SET AT A LIGHTHOUSE AND SUDDENLY THERE WAS NO MAGIC HELP
  





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Definitely forgot to update this, but I broke 10k yesterday by bedtime (and actually stayed up slightly late to do so because at bedtime I was only 300 words away).

My goal for the whole month is only 30k, but I decided to forge ahead as much as possible on any day that I have the spoons to make up for days like, say, today, during which so far, just a few hours before bedtime, I have done zero writing because I barely slept last night and have spent the day exhausted and napping on and off lol.
  





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I got so close to halfway through my goal last night that it would've been extremely tempting to stay up a little late and get to that halfway point if not for the fact that doing so would've required me to start a new chapter lol.

Extremely very glad I did forge ahead those first two days (and yesterday), because on the 3rd, after a terrible night's sleep and also dealing with hormones, it was a struggle just to hit my minimum for the day.

The pacing is definitely off (70 pages in and the investigation hasn't properly started yet) and of course it's garbage, but dang it feels good to be fast-drafting after two years of not finishing a first draft.

A favorite line so far:

She sailed from the room, failing to slam the door only because she was far too well-bred to do so. Not having the same predisposition to dignity, Nettie slammed it for her.
  





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Carlito says...



if not for the fact that doing so would've required me to start a new chapter lol.

literally me yesterday too!! lol could've easily surpassed 30k but ehhhhhhhh.
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This is really turning into a pandemic book lol. Nettie's wife died because a relative who'd been sick recently came for a visit without either telling them he'd been sick recently or wearing a mask, even though Nettie's wife was immunocompromised. The detective investigating the case keeps questioning his whole career and quits by the end, helped along by Nettie spending the entire book like "acab." I did not intend to write a pandemic book but I guess it was inevitable it would happen eventually.

(To clarify, I don't mean a book about a pandemic or the pandemic - I just mean a book very clearly influenced by the pandemic. Like I just read an ARC of Amy Avery's The Longest Autumn, and that was the first thing I've read that really struck me as written during the pandemic because it really spoke to those experiences even though actual contagion was a very small part of it.)
  








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