Thanks, guys! I'm working my way through the reviews! First come, first serve! To jasminebells, I'm going to try this DARE......slowly....probably after I finished the others first. Is that okay?
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Whew! I reviewed everything! I can't believe I actually did it! *pats self on back* I finished all these reviews today because I stayed home from school. Just for this. Nahh, just kidding. I was sick. Still, any more reviews to be requested? "Still can't believe I did it, still can't believe, so fast, how..." *fades away as I walk away*
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I just wanted to point out that it's a real life story and therefore getting rid of the swearing wouldn't make sense, as that's how I remember it. The names were changed for benefits, but the factual details are all the same! Still, I will look into putting more descriptions!
The reason why you don't see the point of it, is because it's the beginning of the novel Still, thank you.
The links to the other chapters are in that. If you don't want to review all of the chapters, that's fine. You can just review the chapter of this link, if you want.
I am nothing but a mouthful of 'sorry's, half-hearted apologies that roll of my tongue, smoothquick, like 'r's or maybe like pocket candy that's just a bit too sweet.
Seems like Eternity {ch-1}(HISTORICAL FICTION) The above mentioned fiction is what I had been working on a months ago but then I dropped it. Thinking of reviving it again. Any help would be useful.
Thanks in advance and when are you posting your next part to the novel?
~Shubhi
"Next time you point a finger I might have to bend it back Or break it, break it off Next time you point a finger I'll point you to the mirror"
novel.php?id=150 This is the link to the novel I'm working on. There are only three chapters so far, and it would be awesome if you could read at least chapter one. (Chapter two is pretty lengthy, and chapter three is about the same length as chapter one.)
And if you still feel like reviewing afterwards and you could review chapter two if you'd like but you don't have too. I would greatly appreciate it!!! (I put I pirate there cuz it looks cool!)
“Fear is the path to the dark side. Fear leads to anger. Anger leads to hate. Hate leads to suffering.”
'Hush, hush!' I whispered; 'people can have many cousins and of all sorts, Miss Cathy, without being any the worse for it; only they needn't keep their company, if they be disagreeable and bad. — Emily Bronte, Wuthering Heights
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