Young Writers Society

Thought I would give this another go

Would you like a friendly, helpful crtique that will give you sound advice and not useless praise or insults? Then you've come to the right place!

I'll do all fiction except for fanfiction and will attempt to review poetry to the best of my abilities.

So just give me a link and I'll get right on it!

-Stella x

First request!!

Loveable Torment by me!

Shred it please?

Thanks, dear!

Hi Stella! I'm here ^^
I would like to ask you to review my NaPo's thread. it's a disaster. It's called: The Disaster!
Here's the link: topic46629.html

Thanks Stella!
*Kat*

Hello Stella!

Could you please review this poem for me? I'm not too proud of it and I need some help.

topic47076.html


Thanks in advance!

And if you really wish to critique a slightly lengthy one, you could always take gander at mine.
It is for a contest and I have time before hand to take in peoples advice and edit it so any help would be lovely!

Hidden Truths

See you around!
~Incognito

Hey there :)

Fancy having a look at a short story? Its a first draft, so I need help on everything! I know i need to develop my character descriptions more, so any ideas on that part would be loved!

Anyway, it is found here

topic47103.html

Thanks in Advance

Okay, I've done those. Anybody else like some?

Please review:

http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/post548466.html?highlight=#548466

Done! Anybody else?

Hey, Stella! Can you review this for me? It's a contest entry, and I want to have it in its best form.

Ashes, Ashes

Thanks!

~Sunny

I'm still open, everybody! Done yours, Sunny.

Hello~


I would like to have this reviewed:


topic48166.html


Thank you very much!


Have a nice day~




+ Katie

Here's one for you.

topic46506.html

The Accidental Rebellion chapter 3. I believe you reviewed the prologue for this as well.

Thanks a lot.

http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic47319.html

here please

Hey Stella! I would love it if you could review this for me:
topic48548.html

Please shred it to bits. Really. Tear it apart.
Thank you so much! I really appreciate it!
-Winter