Done Skins! Getting to yours boss! (Yours boss...haha )
"A superman ... is, on account of certain superior qualities inherent in him, exempted from the ordinary laws which govern men. He is not liable for anything he may do." Nathan Leopold
So, I was wondering if you could please review my poem, Photograph to Sand? There is a rather long spoiler I'm afraid, but it's quite important that one reads it so that one will understand, even just a little...
I don't mind harsh critiques ordinarily, but this one...well, you'll see in the spoiler. Don't feel you have to pussyfoot around, but please don't be too harsh on the content.
Thanks in advance, 'Pyre.
Oh, and the link and a small sample's in my signature
That night she drew her swan breath in a bed Made soft with all her razor blades, That kissed her wrists with the romance you lacked. As the hands that you’d kissed now dealt the trades
Done all except Vampyre. I'll try and get to yours now.
"A superman ... is, on account of certain superior qualities inherent in him, exempted from the ordinary laws which govern men. He is not liable for anything he may do." Nathan Leopold
"A superman ... is, on account of certain superior qualities inherent in him, exempted from the ordinary laws which govern men. He is not liable for anything he may do." Nathan Leopold
Thanks! I'd really appreciate it. I don't really like it (that's an understatement) so I'd like to edit as much as possible before the deadline (31st). Anything you have to say would be great.
"A superman ... is, on account of certain superior qualities inherent in him, exempted from the ordinary laws which govern men. He is not liable for anything he may do." Nathan Leopold
only three chapters eh? that sounds perfect. could you perhaps review my first three action-adventure novel chapters? the name is Caleb's story, here are the links: topic73681.html topic73742.html topic73817.html
if anyone wants a review, post on my profile and I'll get to it in a couple days.
"A superman ... is, on account of certain superior qualities inherent in him, exempted from the ordinary laws which govern men. He is not liable for anything he may do." Nathan Leopold
"A superman ... is, on account of certain superior qualities inherent in him, exempted from the ordinary laws which govern men. He is not liable for anything he may do." Nathan Leopold
"A superman ... is, on account of certain superior qualities inherent in him, exempted from the ordinary laws which govern men. He is not liable for anything he may do." Nathan Leopold
Hey Sprite! Can you review this for me? topic74049.html It's the beginning of another novel, slightly...I think. Who knows how far I'll get this time. :3 Thanks a bunch.
There are three rules for writing a novel. Unfortunately, no one knows what they are. -W. Somerset Maugham
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