A/N: Hey guys! This is an edit of my one story Alcohol. I posted it up on the back-up site but it got no reviews sadly enough. It is fairly long, because after all, it is me who you are talking about. I rate this piece PG-13 so viewer discretion is advised. xD
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Alcohol
The loud sound of my open palm connecting to her flesh echoes through the hotel room, making her silent as she collapses to the ground. Her tears fall settling themselves into the carpet below her. She whimpers, she mutters and it angers me; it makes it impossible for me to piece my thoughts back together. I kick her, the rage coming out in ways that it should not be happening, in ways that even makes me feel disgusted. Yet, I kick her again, even more forcefully, yelling at her to get up, to stand on her feet.
But she doesn’t.
I grab her wrist and pull her to up to face me. She won’t look at me. The place where I hit her seems to be forming a bruise on her cheek, another bruise to match the other over her right eye. My senses blur together and my vision wanders in and out of focus. I think I can hear her ragged breathing. I think I can feel her trembling. The uncertainty, the frustration settles and I lash out once more.
“You garden-variety whore.” I yell, my anger coming in flashes of red. “Does he kiss you like I do?” She flinches at my words, her once seamless beauty changed in her grief. I throw her onto the old creaky bed and stand there facing her. I stumble towards her, confused at how hard it was just to do so. I swear under my breath and I taste the remnants of my recent beer, instantly craving for another.
“You have been with him, you have slept with him, you slut.” I growl, staggering towards her. She seems confused, obviously not understanding what I had said. My irritation increases at her ignorance and for contempt of myself for being in this state. Her golden hair falls around her and she hides behind it, using it like a veil in a last attempt in keeping me from her. A memory of a white wedding veil, dark eyes peering at me from beneath sends a chill up my spine. I gaze down at her crumpled form on the bed, appearing broken and seeming so frail. And she still cries; that stupid, pathetic, infuriating cry.
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Adia was before me, her short brown hair falling lightly in her dark brown eyes. She was smiling her small, impish smile. I could feel her arms around me; I felt her kisses on my cheeks, my lips, and my neck. I felt her soft fingers running up and down my spine. I felt her own presence in my arms, the vitality and the desire to live emanating off of her. The joy of the life, the wonder of excitement, the thrill of love.
She whispered in my ear that she had to leave just then and that she would be right back. She promised.
I am left in darkness. She had left the television on in the living room and the droning of a news broadcast is the only thing I hear.
‘…the winds have reached level four. Hurricane Katrina should be hitting the Gulf of the Caribbean any time now. The water is already pouring above the dunes, the meagre protection put up against such a strong force of nature…’
What did it matter? I wasn’t even close to the Gulf of the Caribbean; I was farthest from those warm waters, safe in my little apartment in New York. Everything was so surreal in this pit of darkness. I could see nothing before me, absolutely nothing. But the news broadcast drones on, and then another comes, and then another, adding to this madness.
‘...the war in Iraq seems to be at another standstill. The Taliban have progresses in their own ways of attacking. They have been making IEDs, triggered by the simple radio signals of cell phones…’
‘…President Bush says it is a sad time in American history. The death toll for this deadly hurricane keeps on rising…’
‘…a strike has risen out side of Guantanamo Bay Prison against the way they were treating the prisoners which evidence shows to be inhumane…’
‘…how to lose 10 pounds in 10 days…’
The words just started to blend together, quicken pace, until I just wanted to cover my ears. I didn’t want to listen anymore. I tried to tune it out with other thoughts but the voices just kept piercing through the darkness. I was fed up with it when I finally decided to get up and just turn it off. I entered the living room, looking out the window casually as I did so out of habit, and turned towards the TV just to see a woman with bright red hair holding a bunch of papers and looking directly at the screen.
‘…another car crash on highway 95. The cause was apparent that it was driving under the influence, the drunk driver ramming into an innocent vehicle, both of them spinning off the highway. There was one fatality, a Caucasian woman around the age of 25, who was at the wheel of a silver Jaguar sedan. The woman was pulled out of the mangled car by fire fighters and placed in an ambulance. She died before they reached the hospital because of severe contusions to the head…’
The phone rang, breaking the silence. I didn’t understand why then, but a sense of foreboding surfaced and I took another look at the television. I picked up the phone just to hear a calm female voice on the other end.
“Is this James Lockhart?”
“Yes.”
“My name is Elizabeth Martin, and I am from the Accident Reconstruction Team and I am here to tell you that around 9:15 this night, your wife Adia Lockhart got into a car accident.”
I couldn’t peel my eyes from the television screen and my heart started to beat faster, the sense of foreboding deepening and my mind automatically starting race.
“I am sad to inform you that she died on her way to the hospital. All our best wishes are with you in this grievous time. We would like you to come to the hospital just to verify that it is indeed you wife…”
I felt the misery find its way out, tears falling down my cheeks. My Adia, my love, dead. The voices faded out and left me with agonizing silence.
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'I am choking, I am being strangled. The strong tanned hands clench my neck,
Cutting off my breathing. My toes start to go numb and so do my fingers but I do not push against this invisible killer. I do not struggle. I embrace the coldness, the dull sensation of this murder.
This simple death is the only thing keeping me from being with Adia and I embrace it. Just thinking about not having to ever have to meet this reality again could bring a smile to my face. A sense of fearlessness rushes over me. I do not fear what was after as long as she was there.
I feel a sharp pain blister through my chest. My heart is hungering for oxygen; my lungs are hungering to take in air, to release carbon dioxide. It feels like strings are being cut from inside me the longer these hands stay wrapped around my neck, pushing into my wind pipe. I start convulsing, not out of choice, but because my own body wanting to live. The desire to live. The joy of living, the wonder of excitement, the thrill of love.
And then I realize it is my hands wrapped around my own neck.'
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I stepped into the room, just to be blinded by fluorescent lights. All I could manage to see was that the walls were white and that the tiles were also white. Immaculate. A subtle smell reached me. It was a retched smell, horrendous. It burned my nostrils and sent an involuntarily lurch to my stomach. I did not dwell on it for very long because right away, my attention was brought to the steel table set up in the middle of this quiet room. A white sheet covered the body I knew to be there, it covered the cause of that smell.
I felt a touch on my arm and I turned to see a blonde haired woman, the one whose name was Elizabeth Martin, the one who had scheduled this meeting. She looked up at me reassuringly and I walked towards it weakly, not knowing if I would have been able to do it.
A doctor, also wearing a white lab coat and blue gloves lifted the sheet slowly away from the dead corpse. I stared at it in horror, my stomach doing an involuntary flip.
It couldn’t have been my Adia; my beautiful, strong Adia.
But it was sure enough. They had cleaned her up, her brown bangs falling lightly into her face. Her mouth in a hard grimace. I knew on the other side there was a huge depression in her head for where her skull had collapsed. Cuts and scars littered her face and her nose was surely broken. Her skin was pale, and when I touched it, cold. So very cold. I felt the tears coming once more, the tears which had been plaguing me for the last couple hours.
To my disgust, a fly landed on her face and walked across it, undisturbed. I felt the bile rising in the back of my throat. It was definitely her. My Adia.
I fell to the white floor, and I felt Elizabeth’s arms around me, whispering assurances that everything would be alright. She said I didn’t have to worry about my work at the hospital. I could take as much time off as I wanted. She said everything would be alright.
I just laid there, relishing the coolness of the tiles against my skin.
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'My senses seem to dull and mingle with my feelings of loneliness and misery. I
Feel the sharp pang of reality, of the brutality of it. I never want to see it again. I never want to face the hopelessness of it. I drown myself in intoxication. I drown myself in the alcohol, the same alcohol which caused the love of my life dying.
It dulls my senses, places me in a world where I need not have to feel pain, or happiness, or anything at all. I succumb to the tainted corners of my mind, remembering nothing. I pick up copies of my favourite books, only to put them down again because I can not piece the words together. My mind is corroding away. I remember being read to, that sweet voice coming through this unstoppable haze.
But it is the drink I crave; that pick-me-up is the only thing keeping me going. I need it; I need the beer, the brandy, the whiskey, the rum. They are the only things needed to keep me from becoming sober, to keep me from the sharp sorrow of the real world.
I get glimpses in the moments when I was closest to sobriety, sometimes moments of a funeral, or a birthday, but the main one is a wedding. It is a mirror image of my first, but I face not Adia at the altar, some other woman, a beautiful blonde twig of a woman, and I see her reassuring smile, the smile that is not Adia’s. I see the veil. The image disappears into the back of my mind, the drunkenness returning to me once more, covering everything in that sleepy haze.'
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I watched her from the other side of the bar, never losing sight of her golden hair, or flirtatious smile. The familiar rage came to me as I saw her stoop over to kiss him. He pulled her closer, and the innocent kiss became much more. Her fingers threaded through his hair, and his hands found their way below her shirt stealthily. They fell over in their booth and their bodies became an undecipherable tangle.
I got to my feet, outraged and headed towards their table, ideas racing through my mind. I nearly fell over but someone caught me and helped me stand upright again, saying something about how I was smashed. I shrugged the man off and looked over towards them once more hands balling themselves into fists. They were still in their tangle of intimacy.
Because of my slow progress, I watched a waitress look at them in disgust and place the bill on the table. The man pushed Elizabeth away and placed a handful of bills onto the table and turned once more towards her. He hunched over and I thought they were going to start up again, but instead he whispered something in her ear which made her laugh lightly. I felt my heart shrivel inside. They both got to their feet and exited the bar.
Angered and frustrated, I pulled my keys out of my pocket and headed for the bar door, but again was stopped.
“Man, I can’t let you drive. You can barely walk,” the guy spoke.
“I am going to drive,” I said gruffly, and tried to push him out of the way, only ending up crashing into another table.
“I am sorry sir. Let me call you a taxi.”
“I told you I am fine.” He did not appear to hear this or understand it for he pulled out a fancy cell phone and started to dial a number. I took the chance and brushed past him. Once out side I realized that they were gone, and that there was no way that I could follow them. Opening my door, which I had not locked in my drunken haze, I fiddled with the ignition. After a couple minutes I got it going and I managed to get out of the parking lot.
I returned home, just to fall unconscious, alone, in my bed.
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I am over top of the blonde haired woman, hands binding tightly around her neck.
I feel my thumbs pushing into her wind pipe, collapsing it and causing the air to never be able to return to her. She is struggling, writhing in my arms, the tears falling down, blue eyes staring up at me. She is trying to speak to me; she is trying to get me to stop. But there is nothing to stop this anger inside of me, this realistic ache that never seems to leave me.
She was not my Adia. She was not the one who I loved. She was not the one who I wished to see everyday, to hold in my arms. And I hold that against her.
Her head starts turning, eyes almost bulging out of her head, her mouth open wide as if releasing a silent scream. But she grows limp, her hands fall to her side, and her pupils start to dilate. I release her, realizing just what I had just done. I back off the bead, tears surfacing in my own eyes. I see her crumpled form on those old hotel bed covers; I see her long golden hair now matted. I see the bruises which my hands had left on her neck.
She was dead.
And I had killed her.
I found an instant sobriety right then and there, the sharpness of reality catching me. Why? Elizabeth wouldn’t have had to die if she didn’t do what she did. The details of that night coming back to me in rounds. I see her kissing that man. I see his hands reaching up her shirt, I see his black hair and square jaw. I see her gentle frame pressed against him. I see their legs tangled in the red booth.
When she looks up, a sudden awareness hits me, shocking me. It wasn’t her. Her features were too delicate, her eyes a placid green, her nose slightly bulbous. That golden haired woman long ago wasn’t my Elizabeth. Elizabeth hadn’t actually…
The tears come instantly, finding themselves falling recklessly from my own cheeks. I fall back, slamming into the door and collapsing down to the ground, hands grasping at the grey carpet. That bland color reflecting the defeated feeling mirrored unto myself. I couldn’t get over looking at these big tanned hands, evidently murderers in their own right. I fell and pressed my face to the floor, wanting the coolness of the tiled floor in the morgue years ago. I didn’t want to get up, I didn’t ever want to move again. But I had to do something.
I got up just to be stopped in my tracks. I stared at her, that broken form on the bed. I became engrossed with watching a fly walk undisturbed across her flesh.
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