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This Lurking Beast



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Fri Oct 28, 2011 4:11 pm
Hollow says...



Story taken off for personal reasons.
Last edited by Hollow on Wed Nov 23, 2011 1:09 am, edited 2 times in total.
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Sat Oct 29, 2011 5:57 am
Euhuman says...



Wow. Just to start I am a prose writer and I am very serious when it comes to essence, structure, matter and composition

I am not going to dissect your work, every writer has a style and readers should not try meddle with it
Beautiful read. Excellent scene and emotion conception. You write so fluently and so rightly. I am immensely impressed by the sentence composition and the way you made the story run. I can see you took a lot of pain in writing it and it shows it thoroughly. Wow.

I am just spell bound. Keep writing with the same zeal and style. Love
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