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Hourglass (pretty short)



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Thu Mar 10, 2005 4:56 pm
Duskglimmer says...



This is a cool beginning... where does it go from there?
The robbed that smiles, steals something from the thief. ~William Shakespeare, Othello
Boo. SPEW is watching.
  





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Thu Mar 10, 2005 9:46 pm
Sam says...



it's an add-on to an existing story... :wink:
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Thu Mar 10, 2005 10:12 pm
bluecows says...



I like it, but i wanna know more about luke (is that his name?) and Liberty
you said it was an ad on to an other story, can i see the story?

~blue~ :D
To see a world in a grain of sand and a heaven in a wild flower,
hold infinity in the palm of your hand and eternity in an hour. – William Blake

I was lying in bed, watching the stars and i thought, 'where the hell is the ceiling?' :wink:
  





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Thu Mar 10, 2005 11:03 pm
Sam says...



sure. just scroll back a couple posts...:D
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Fri Mar 11, 2005 1:18 am
Elizabeth says...



Hehe, nice... somebody got killed! I love it when people get killed because... it just adds a sudden.... death to intrest... nothing more to say... I'm the lazy lady.
  





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Fri Mar 11, 2005 10:28 pm
hekategirl says...



I love this!!! and I agree with TBR, when you pulled in death it gave it a cool twist.

P.S bluecows and Duskglimmer you can just look in her profolio too, for the past stories....
  





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Sat Mar 12, 2005 10:42 pm
Emma says...



Its good so far, man you have a better use of words than me! And your younger! I really need to start learning in English....
  





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Mon Jun 06, 2005 3:14 am
nickelpickle says...



omg...you're gonna keep me up all night reading this story sam....i agree, death is a neccessity in this story...continue the good work
"There's a light at each end of this tunnel,
You shout 'cause you're just as far in as you'll ever be out
And these mistakes you've made, you'll just make them again
If you only try turning around."
  








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