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Continued from Nightime isnt forever



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Mon May 23, 2005 8:07 pm
Little Dreamer says...



This is where I last left off...

A million emotions ran through Maria's head as she read the letter, What was she going to do now? Van Helsing the third was the great grandson of the first Van Helsing who helped Mena Harker and Jonathon Harker destroy her father and for some reason now had it out for her as well, she didnt even know she was the daughter of Dracula. Victor took her hand and led her to his car,"We dont have much time, we must hurry." She looked at him and asked, "Don't have much time for what?" He stopped walking and looked at her, "We must train you or you'll be killed by him and without you alive the whole clan will die and we will suffer an eternity in hell." "How is that possible?" she asked not understanding him. "We will talk it over in the car." He then turned and opened the car door for her, she then took one last look before entering at what had been her home for all her life. Not knowing what lied ahead she stepped into the car and left it all behind her her for the time, vowing she would not let her people down.

Chapter 2
As they pulled out she again asked the question from earlier, how did she fit into ending the entire vampire race if she died? The old wise vampire began his story, In 1466 as you know your father was prince, during the 1467 a great war broke out between the turks and your father they he of course won, but in an attempt to get at him in any way possible they sent a letter of your fathers death to his queen at the time and your mother Elizabetia." Maria interupted him, "How can I be the child of her, there was no record of a child conceived by Elizabetia and Dracula?" He began again,"They kept it hidden, and when she thought your father was dead she sent you to live at the compound; not knowing where you were your father renounced god thus becoming the vampire we all know." "How do I fit into it though?" she asked not knowing the truth. "You are the last living vampire with the blood of Dracula coursing through your veins, since your father was father to all vampires if you die we will die, you in a way are our clans sire." Maria then understood, "So if I die, we all die?" She looked out the window. "If you die our whole clan will die, leaving the vampire race vulnerable to Van Helsing and his vampire slayers."
After an hour of driving through the English countryside they came to a gate, Maria looked up to see a towering mansion at the top of the hill. "Where are we?" she asked. "We are at another clan close to your fathers, they were the gypsies that helped Dracula move around from country to country; what most people didnt know was they were vampires too." The gates then opened and they proceded towards the castle ahead. It was a dark erie looking castle near the woods that seemed to glare and welcome guest at the same time. Victor parked at the entrance and came around to open her door. "What are we doing here?" she asked getting chills up her spine as a cold wind swept by. "The leader of this clan will train you, his name is Jonathon Vasquez Da More." he answered her. She had heard the name but lacked the honor of ever meeting him. They walked up to the doors, the doors began to open and they were soon met by a tall chiseled man who was rather handsome. "Victor" he said nodding. He then looked at Maira, she could feel his ice blue eyes raking over her body and was chilled as well as warmed by them, her eyes then met his and it felt as if he were trying to read her thoughts, she looked away. "And you are?" he asked her. Iam maria sanchez, the newfound daughter of Dracula." He gave a look and looked at Victor with disbelief. "Dracula never mentioned a daughter, how is this possible?" "It was hidden for her protection." Victor replied. Jonathon gave a look and said," I understand." He then gave a smile and said forgive Maira Iam" "Jonathon Vasquez Da More." she finished extending a hand to him. He smiled and shook it, that is quite true.

sorry all i have time for.
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Mon May 23, 2005 8:34 pm
Rei says...



GAH! I'm sorry, but you gotta use proper paragraphs if you want people to be able to read this.
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Mon May 23, 2005 8:36 pm
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Very good very good more must read more
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Tue May 24, 2005 7:21 pm
Little Dreamer says...



Im sorry I thought I did put paragraphs it wasnt untill today I relized I hadnt ](*,)
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