Yeah, this was definitely one of your more confusing Hourglass stories.
I think you need to add some more historical stuff or something, because it seems extremely contemporary. I didn't really like this one very much. It was a bit too stream-of-consciousness for me.
Got YWS?
"Most of us have far more courage than we ever dreamed we possessed."
- Dale Carnegie
No, it doesn't make much sense, but then I haven't been reading it. Although it is kind of amusing. But then I'm not really interested in humourous writing. However, I do say again that I think we've got a new Gordon Korman. The first book he published was written when he was about your age.
Please, sit down before you fall down.
Belloq, "Raiders of the Lost Ark"
Hmm...I followed all the rules...it's supposed to sound semi-contemporary, 'cause I hate novels that are like schoolbooks. It's annoying. *checks* all slang/profanity's within time range. *shrugs* Oh well. I have to go over it again anyway. Thanks guys!
*passes out cupcakes*
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