Dang.
Good gravy, Sam, that was one of your greatest Hourglasses. The only nitpick I have is that the beginning seemed a bit too contemporary, but I'm not really sure how you could change that... hmm. Oh well. It's not bad or anything.
You should put all these together on her; it'd be cool to read 'em all at once. How many pages is this thing now?
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