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Give me a Reason Continued



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Tue Aug 30, 2005 8:01 pm
AngelBaby88 says...



Im just going to continue from where I left off.

Chapter one part 2
"Are you okay?"
I looked at my best friend and April and gave her a look.
"Why do you ask?"
"You seem to off in your own little world, you know how you are when somethings up."
I sighed, "Its Tom again.''
"What about him?'' she got that look in her eye like she was fixen to go off.
"Hes just being his usal prick self, but really im okay."
"Is that how you got that black eye?"
How did she know, I was pretty sure I had covered well enough with my foundation. I said nothing.
"Uh-huh, thats what I thought. Sometimes i really want to kill that excuse for a man if that much."
I laughed and told her to calm down.
"well your mom dont give a shit about you, so how are you going to take care of it?"
She was right, I couldnt run away because I had no where to go or any money for that matter, and I sure as hell didnt want to end up in a home for girls.
I shrugged my shoulders and tried to concentrate on my algebra which was seeming to mix with my mood at the moment. I tapped on Aprils shoulder, she turned around.
"What?"
"Do you care if I crash at your house long enough to make a phone call?"
She looked at me and asked call who?
'' Im thinkin about calling DHS and seeing if they can help me out any."
"Are you serious?!" she looked shocked.
I nodded, "Yeah, Mom and Tom wouldnt know intill it was to late."
"Girls? Do we have a problem?"
We looked up to see Mrs.Sweeny calling to us.
"No." we both answered. "Then get back to work and dont make me tell you again."
We both giggled and got back to work. Hopefully in a week or so Id be livin with a new faimly somewhere where someone cared.

Because of time iam going to cut this short.
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Wed Aug 31, 2005 7:51 pm
AngelBaby88 says...



Hey guys i would like to know if this story is sounding good and would like for to crit for me okay
thanks!!!!!! :wink:
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