its my first time writing something, please give me your comments !!! . Here goes nothing :
Her hands were chained at her side , an iron chain was tied around her hip and connected to the wall . She looked and felt weak , her head spun as she looked up for the last time and saw the plate of food that was kept in front of her , she lifted her foot to take a step but stopped and remembered she couldn't and wouldn't be able to move forward . Her head went down . Her brown hair covered her face completely . She said a silent prayer to god , praying for her family . She heard her cell door open and looked up .
As she looked up she saw a small fat man enter . He was bald and short and smelt weird . He was sweaty but nothing compared to the girl . He wore a grey shirt and black pants , like every other guard in this palace/dungeon place . He came towards the girl in four swift strides trying to avoid getting his shoes dirty . He was three inches shorter than the girl . He started to takeout something from his shoe .
He reached for a knife . The knife had floral designs everywhere except for the blade . It had three emeralds , then three ruby's and then three blue sapphires engraved on the bottom of the handle . He took it out and held it against the girls throat and said "Girl tell me your name" . She said very calmly "why ?" .
"before I kill i need to know the victims name"
"before I tell my name , can I know why was I bought in this hellhole" She raised her voice a bit .
"your family betrayed this kingdom , they killed most of our soldiers , they set fire to all the houses , my family died in that fire" He said while digging the knife into her throat .
"I don't even know who my family was , they left me to grow up on my own" The girl said , the truth was shown from her eyes , but he didn't care about that , he cared about revenge .
"I don't care about whether you knew your family or not , I have sworn to kill your family The Blackfeathers , until none of you is left and guess what your the last, so tell me your name"He said .
The whole dungeon started to shake the chains that were tied to her hips and hands opened themselves , around her body a black mist started to form , the bald guy was taken a back . Her brown eyes went black , her hair flying slightly in her air . She was 5 inches above the ground , she made a crushing action with her right hand and the bald guy died on the spot , his head was twisted in an awkward way , almost detached from his head . His hand's were behind his back and lots of cuts were there , lots of blood was there .
Then abruptly she fell to ground , the mist around her body had vanished but her eyes were still black . She went towards the guy and took his knife and put it into her boot and whispered to him "My name is Alessaandra , burn in hell" and then a voice entered her head , it slowly said "Alessandra , remember one thing , control us,use for whatever but if you don't use us or control us , we will learn to control you" .
Alessandra pulled her hair and screamed , a sudden pressure went all around her body and stopped . She looked at the dead body beside her and went back and clutched her legs , she shivered and then started crying . She couldn't have done that , she couldn't believe what she had done ,she sat there just staring at it . A white light hit her and a boy around her age entered , he had black hair and brown eyes . He wore a white shirt and blue baggy jeans and converse he went and sat near her and said "its okay" , Alessandra turned her head towards him and said "how is it okay , i just killed a man"
"well I've burned down a house" he said
"I don't care what you did , I don't even know who you are ?" Alessandra said while staring at him
"Well i'm Kevin Leoford , and come one you'll find out more if you come with me , how about it ?" he said while getting up and offering a hand , he gave a slight smile ,the truth was shining from him . Alessandra nodded , and grabbed his hand and they walked out . She didn't know what she had just gotten into .
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