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Considerably Sharp Teeth
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Points: 1478
Reviews: 220
Tue Jan 08, 2008 1:36 am
Sleeping Valor
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Nice story. Automatically has my seal of aproval because the vampire is funny. *hugs vampires* Var var amusing. I have only one question...
“You're a creepy bastard, you know it?”
...isn't that suposed to be "You're a creepy bastard, you know
that
?"
(Maybe it's just me since that's how I'm most used to seeing it phrased)
There's more, right?
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Points: 6040
Reviews: 142
Tue Jan 08, 2008 2:38 am
Doctor Kitty
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There'll be more... eventually.
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worlds buzz over us like bees, / we be splendid in new bones.
— Lucille Clifton
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Points: 1478
Reviews: 220