This is somthing I just started. I have a rough idea where I going with this, but I need it to be error-free first! Please help
The explosion happened at mid-day.
At first it was a low hum, something that everyone could hear, yet no one pointed out. It was only when it became more fierce, more grinding, that the whispering started. What’s that? People asked their friends. Do you hear it too?
The teacher’s expression became distracted. As the noise got louder, he slowly stopped teaching. Even the whispering stopped. Everyone was listening, even me. We didn’t feel fear, or even panic. Just confusion. What was that noise, and why was it bringing such silence with it?
At that moment, everyone in the class was one person. The enemies, bullies, nerds, book worms. At that moment, our thoughts were together. We were one.
A sudden force threw me off my chair. My desk fell on the ground, making a splintering crack on the floor. And I wasn’t alone. All around me, chairs were falling, exercise books ripping. Their owners were either knocked to the ground or gripping onto unsteady objects, trying to dig their feet into the floor.
But there were no screams.
The only sound was the grinding, now a series of deafening bangs. They were so loud that the sound was almost muted to our ears. Like how scorching sand feels cold on bare feet. Something that physics just can’t cope with.
Something that we can’t cope with.
I wanted to put my hands to my ears to block out the muted bangs, but my hand was trapped under something, and it wouldn’t move. Not feeling the pain I should have been feeling was even worse. It made me feel dead, senseless.
My eyes began to sting. All I could see was a bright red sparks, flying everywhere. Towards the whiteboard, the fallen desks. Towards me.
I suddenly became aware of how hot it was. My back, pressed against the floor, felt like it was on fire. My legs, curled up close to my body, were suddenly unbearable to live with. I would have done anything for them to be cut off, separated from me. Anything for the pain to stop.
The ashes flying around made it had to breathe. My mouth felt choked, my throat dry. I coughed and coughed, but the ashes had stuck fast inside me – and they refused to come out. The most horrible, burning pain soared up my throat. I couldn’t live like this. The pain was killing me. And still, the bangs kept coming, bring smoke smelling of burnt plastic and pallid flesh to my nostrils. Making me heave in disgust.
And slowly, wails filled my ears. Wails for it to stop. Wails for the pain to go away.
I closed my eyes, not wanting to see the destruction any more.
Not wanting to hear my screams.
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