Best of friends
By Blue Bell
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Evie and Lottie were best friends. They had known each
other since they were born, actually they had the same
birthday on the exact same day.”Well I was born ten min
earlier. Evie bragged. But Lottie didn’t even care she just
listened carefully while doing a picture of her and Evie.
And at the top she wrote in big bold letters
BEST OF FRIENDS!
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Her big brother Tony marched in and grabbed her
piece of paper. “ Hey give me that back! Shouted Lottie
In an angry voice. Then Tony made a stupid story about
the picture she drew. Lottie then shouted “Stop being so stupid Tony.
Meanwhile in the garden Mum was
Apologising to Mrs. Hockings their next door neighbour about Tony’s ball incident.
"I am very sorry I will have a very serious talk with Tony.
"Thankyou so much.Said Mrs.Hockings in a lady-like way.
And off went Mum.
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Up went Mum, her face was red as a tomato, her feet was
stamping so hard you could hear it all the way from next
door. “Who's that. Shouted Evie in scared voice.
Mum bashed in through the door BANG!! “ Tony!!!
What on earth were you thinking? First you smashed
Old Bobby’s window, second you beat up the dog, and
third you ruined Lottie and Evie’s best friends picture.
And last of not least you and your so-called mates kicked
the ball at Mrs. Hockings cat and now it’s gone missing.
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“Thanks a lot, now I have to find the missing cat before
they come after me! And Tony added “Who are they.
Then Mum raised her voice so loud that you could see
her face was boiling hot. “The police
Who else. "Now go to your room young man and wait for
to tell you to come out of it. "And you girls are going to
help me find that missing cat. “Wahoo cried the girls.
After that mum walked out the room. The girls had their
own plans.
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The girls got busy. “Ok Evie you do posters and I do the
story about a cute innocent cat. Said Lottie. And they
got cracking. Meanwhile in Tony’s bedroom there was a
knock on window. “hey Tones what are you
still doing here you should be with us playing knock –to-
knock by now. Whispered Jim one of Tony’s so-called
mates. “ Dude I'm grounded for being horrid. Mumbled
Tony. “ then sneak off with me and the gang or is it too
risky or you’ve turned into cool to mama’s boy. He joked.
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Tony had a choice to make, was he turning into a kind
Mamma’s boy or a coolest person in town. Then he got dressed and got put
his shoes on and then climbed out in such a hurry that
he forgot to close his window or hide a toy under the
bed to look just like him, so he went off with his friends
and had such fun that he forgot mum ever shouted.
At home the girls finished decorating their poster. Evie
drew a cute little sad cat on the pavement looking for a
home. And Lottie wrote:
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Name of missing cat: Murray
description of cat: it has hazel eyes very young but
delicate.
Reward: Who ever finds this cat will receive £100 .
The number to call: 073 786 2907
“I’m impressed. Said mum walking in. Then she looked
at Evie’s . “I think that they are both beautiful. “Hey why don’t we
tell Tony in case he wants to help us find the cat, anyway it was his fault
so he should help us find it. We all agreed. Then we all marched up to Tony’s room but when we got there .......
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Tony was gone! Mum looked everywhere she couldn’t see
any sign of him. Then mum’s skin was starting to cover
with goose bums. She looked straight over to the
window it was still open then she noticed there was a
rough piece of paper on the window sill. Mum picked it
up and opened it up and she read out loud:
knock –to-knock
stick bogeys on kids
go to church and fart.
make fun of people.
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Mum was shocked and surprised. Then I asked a
uestion. “Mum is Evie staying over? Mum nodded too
shocked to speak. Then Tony sneaked in from the window. “byeeeeeeee hiya mum he said to Mum in a
toned voice. “Explain your self Mr. Mum said in a impation voice
After that the row began. Evie and I sneaked off before she sweared. Evie and I rushed out-
side to start the mission . “Wait I think we should write
a letter to Mum so she knows were we are. Lottie suggested.
Then we got down to business.
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