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The Burning of Nations



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Tue Jun 22, 2010 2:06 am
AspiringAuthorA..M. says...



I love how this chapter really connects with people, while several of my other ones are criticized for being faulty. But I as the writer, find them all the same. So it's hard fro me to distinguish what exactly makes this one stand out.
"Jesus said to her, “I am the resurrection and the life. The one who believes in me will live, even though they die; and whoever lives by believing in me will never die. Do you believe this?”
-John 11:25-26
  








Besides, if you want perfection, write a haiku. Anything longer is bound to have some passages that don't work as well as they might.
— Philip Pullman