Oh, and sorry if I sounded like I was just pciking out errors and not reviewing. I got kicked off before I could say how much I liked this story. The first part with Lucifer was really cool, but the part with Gabriel, well, you lost your muse, so just keep writing. As for Simon, why is Simon a bad guy? I see the biblical reference, but not the relevance. Oh yeah, and when are you gonna update Emergence, huh!?
I think it was really good, and well written. The character is quite well explained, but maybe there was a bit too much about the guns. I'd definatly like to read a continuation of this though.
I'm so happy 'cos today I found my friends
They're in my head
I'm so ugly but that's OK 'cos so are you
~Lithium
Nirvana~
You commented to one of my posts, so I looked around and found this. It was something that I could dive into without it taking hours. In other words, I liked that it was short and to the point, yet deep. Do you know what I'm talking about?
Probably not, but anyways by the time I read it I had no complaints. Good job man.
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