(I haven't written in a while, so this is my coming back story. I don't know if it's that good. Please critique. Also, I don't have MS Word so I have no way to spell check besides using my own brain.)
The cold winter air blew through the quiet town, making the snow covered trees quiver violently. A hooded figure jogged down a street, making no noise at all. With a disheveled sigh, the figure pulled down the hood, revealing his shadowy face. His messy, midnight black hair fell over his dull grey eyes. He had stopped jogging, now he stood still in the darkness. He ran a hand through his hair, yanking at some of the knots he didn't bother to comb out. Black jeans clung tightly onto his skin, matching his black tank top. He saw a teenage girl around his age sitting alone at a stop sign. A wicked grin formed on his thin lips, and a tingle ran through his entire body. The girl leaned against the pole, looking quite scared. She cradled her bulkly, leather purse in one hand while holding a cellphone to her ear with the other.
He approached her, his wicked grin had faded into a mere friendly smile. He extended a hand to her, "I'm Harkin."
The girl looked up at him, mesmerized by his good looks. She had almost forgotten that she was still talking on the cellphone. Quickly, she put the phone back to her ear.
"Nikky, can I call you back later?" She said into the phone speaker, waiting for a response. Once she said goodbye, she snapped the phone shut. She reached out her hand and took Harkin's hand. "I'm Vala."
Harkin's smile grew wider as he heard her name. Vala means Chosen, Why would her parents name her Chosen? He pondered the thought in his mind for a few seconds.
"You have a lovely name," He let go of her hand, letting it fall gently back to her waist.
"As do you," Vala replied, a confident tone in her voice as she looked deep into his eyes.
"Can you tell me which way Darke Street is?" Harkin asked, shifting most of his weight onto his other foot. He glanced over the girl for the first time. He noticed that she was rather beautiful, but it didn't matter, she would be just another meal for him.
"Sure," Vala said, a smile upon her lips aswell. She turned and pointed straight ahead. In that moment, Harkin was on her. He grabbed her shoulder and spun her around, his grey eyes had now turned into a crimson color.
"Did your parents ever tell you not to talk to strangers?" He murmured quietly as his fangs slid from his gums. Before she could scream, Harkin's fangs had penetrated the skin on her neck, the blood already flowing rapidly into his mouth. The taste of the girl's blood was so addicting, like a drug. Like lightning, Vala's hand shot out, grabbing Harkin's neck. She pulled him away from her own body, digging her nails which felt as sharp as claws into his neck. He struggled in her grip, his breath coming out in ragged gasps, even though he didn't need to breathe.
"Didn't your parents ever tell you not to bite strangers?" Vala chuckled, licking her lips. Her eyes turned a transparent, silver color and the bite mark on her neck healed as if by magic.That's when Harkin realized it, when everything made sense. Vala was a werewolf.
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